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| IcedOverFire 2007-04-27 ch 1, | abuseI loved this! IT was so nice! Good luck with your other stories! This was great! |
| cagalliyulathha 2007-03-26 ch 1, | abuseMe: I'm a bit confused... AND YOU KNOCKED MY REVIEW BUDDY OUT! Krad: uhhrgg my head,...wow homocidal blonde?I don't like the nick they gave me! I have a good side to you know! Me:Are you okay? Krad: that was SO the last time I do my stunts myself!Uhrg it's spinning here Me: well I'm off with Krad to the hospital he seems a bit green maybe he has a concussion -_-" |
| Dark Fox 14 2006-09-03 ch 1, | abuseThat was sweet, lol. Riku if you don't want Krad I'll take him! I love psycopaths & bad guys! lol. joking joking, or maybe not. ANYWAY! great story! |
| star-chan 2006-01-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseaw...that was so cute!why does it have to be a one-shot!=D |
| Angel selphie666 2006-01-14 ch 1, | abuseOmg! what a Fantasic Story |
| Raberba girl 2005-12-30 ch 1, | abuse*howls* No! *wrestles Daisuke away from Risa* Whoo hoo, Saehara! I like the role you gave him. *falls out of chair and dies laughing at the thought of Krad being a priest* *comes back to life and dies laughing again at the thought of Satoshi being Dark’s best man* |
| existence92 2005-11-23 ch 1, | abuseNice, but it was a little rushed... |
| JadeLan 2005-09-02 ch 1, | abusethis fic was so beautiful...any chance of a new chappie or sequel? ^_^ *hopeful face* |
| Maliya 2005-08-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseaw, it's nice. |
| heartillyangel 2005-08-21 ch 1, | abuseVery cute story. Dark and Riku make a really cute couple. I liked the way you wrote it ^^ |
| w-l-k 2005-07-18 ch 1, | abuseunbelievebly cute |
| KDreams 2005-07-15 ch 1, | abuse...it was really cute!! XD I really loved how they met, and the wedding part was really great too. The ending, however, was very rushed. It happened way too quickly, in the blink of an eye Riku was like in love with him when just a second ago she hated him. It happened WAY too quickly. Also, I have to say... this story was more like a multichapter story squeezed into one page. It really didn't seem like a one-shot at all. Way too long. But other than those things... I really loved it! Good luck in the contest! |
| lil-saturn-goddess 2005-07-07 ch 1, | abuseaw fantastic story...^^ |
| SeLeNa_MoUsy 2005-07-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseaw... how kawaii! that was so cute! i loved it... i love darkxriku fanfics... an urs was beautiful! i hope u type up some more darkxriku fanfics! |
| Maite 2005-07-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseI loved it! Really funny, and kind of possible. That ending. Too... quick at the end. the rest? excellently well developed |