strange. anyway love your stuff!

that's pretty deep and disturbing. Your diction was very well chosen though.

...Yeah...

You think one day you'll feel up to writing a longer fic about the two of them? 'Course you don't seem to be the kind to go for happy endings - but even so - I would certainly enjoy seeing a Kohaku x Sango fic of some actual length.

You're so wonderful, I can compare you to Resmiranda. I'm still not sure whose better though.. perhaps we're all good. I love this piece, and SangoKohaku. Great job.

I really like your style. It's ambiguous, yet distinct. Circumlocutious, yet direct. Hm, a little of everything--that's exactly what makes a good story.

(Renata)

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wonderful and beautiful, again. I like the concepts; trying to please everyone, and losing yourself... loverly.

Uwa, you write such lyrical and painful SangoKohaku fics. You did great keeping up the theme of her being pieces held together and simultaneously broken apart by memories. I liked this one a lot as well. I look forward to whatever you write next. :)