Never read an 'Iroh is Zuko's father' fanfiction before. This is a first and I love it. It's good, felt sorry for the scribe though.

wow, just wow. that was an unsespecting ending, you rock!

Wow, you're a great writer! Interesting idea, too.

I... Well... THAT STORY WAS AMAZING! YOUR FANFICTION IS THE BEST I HAVE EVER READ! Aside from that, I have no further comment. Well... you could try for a longer fiction. You could make an AMAZING novel writer. your talent is wasted on short stories like these.
Sincerely,
K.B.

That was AWESOME. That's quite a talent you have, and to shed light on something I personally never even considered before now. Major kudos for proper spelling a grammar.

thank you for a good read!!

Scott
OPTRTA

wow... this is awesome. you have a really unique writing style. the ending made me sad tho. thanx for the review!

Wow! That really makes me think about Zuko's relationship with Iroh differently. Well done!

Words to describe it. That's all I really want right now. Amazing, that being the understatement of the century. beyond words.

I likey! Likey a lot! XD It is very interesting notion that Iroh is Zuko's old man, there has been fanfics putting forth that notion, but this is the best i've read. Keep it up!

Awesome. It's well written, has a good pace, and makes so much sense. Marvelous job. I hope you continue to write more Avatar stories. =)

o...poor scribe! I liked this story! And i like your theories! I hope you wright more stories so i may read them!

Love the scribe, he's the best character- so arrogant, yet so dead by the end.