That was beautiful! You are an excellent writer.

I like commas, too.

beautifully written.

I absolutely love the use of the itallicized (sc?) words to describe the actions. I love how it's almost a story in itself, and the phrase, "return to the world..." shows the deep bond people share when their..you knowing. People always think that lemons are dirty, trashy smut (at least my friends do), but they don't understand how some authors (like you) show how deep it really is.

(srry 4 drabbling on u, i just really needed to get that out of my system and i just happened to be reading this)

This was a cute one-shot! Shippo was adorable!

Hehehehe! I like commas, too! Thanks-eak :)

WHY IS FIRST CHAPTER ABOUT NOTHING BUT DESCRIBING

This was really good. I love the language you use to describe everything - nice job!

that was beautiful

That was amazing.

WTF? This is fucking retarded!

Very well written.

I'm a HENTAI

A bit of reading between the lines, and I enjoyed that.

The Shippocandy thing was actually my favorite part.

A not quite fluffy but not quite dark story. I loved it.

Shockingly sublime. The parts in italics really blew me out of the water; impressively done. I think it is utterly superb.

I enjoy stories such as these; ficlets that don't have a plot or even a genre, but are excellent to read to to the quality of the writer.

This, along with Stricken, warrants you a special place in any reader's heart. You're one of my favorites on ff.n.