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| Auqa Eyes 2005-08-13 ch 1,  | abuseWow, this is just... wow. I really like it. Its good. It seems to fit the story and everything! Its great! |
| Me 2005-08-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseSEQAUL! You gotta have a sequal! *puupy eyes* This was great. Hiei and Zeru... swet! |
| Darknesspirals 2005-07-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseThough the messages are standard ones for Hiei, the format is different. It was a nice read. |
| Agent Dark Moose 2005-07-05 ch 1, | abuseThat was amazing, Zelia-san! Utterly amazing! I really have to wonder as to where you come up with such ideas. What a magnificent twist; quite a breath of fresh air, considering the trash that now litters the fandom. You're such a fabulous writer, Zelia-san. Very nice job with this. I can't wait to see more from you. ~Lynn |
| hyperdude 2005-07-05 ch 1, | abuseI think that this was very deep. Somethings may not be what they are; and to try and protect what's closest to you. It's about realizing when one is a deceiver, or if someone genuinely means something. It hurts the most when you love someone, and they slam your face in the dirt, after all. Very well done. It's unusual, but there's nothing bad about it; in fact, I think this is a bit better than a few othewr one of your one-shots. Keep writing! |
| Sunkissed Lavender 2005-07-05 ch 1, | abuseI like this. Its good. Maybe a sequal? That would be interesting. Good job! *Adds to fave* |
| Seto'segyptianluvr 2005-07-04 ch 1, | abuseWhat I think about this unusual story is that it rocks! Man this is the best story I've read all week! And trust me since school got out all I've been doing is reading fics! So awesome job! |
| kikira-san 2005-07-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseinteresting. I like the not so often mentioned characters coming out. Usually its Bui and Hiei that is analyzed and analyzed for (a) very obvious reason(s). I did like the background on Zeru, but I felt very badly for Hiei. The only thing I disliked was the many breaks in the story but that's how it had to go and I understand that. I liked how Hiei showed up Zeru with his new love, new powers, etc.. (I wish I could go back to people I made a fool of myself in front of and show them up)^-^ I enjoyed it. |
| Jessica 2005-07-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseAwesome hurry add more now now thanks Jessica |