woah, very dark. cool.

Nice. Interestingly nice.

wot!! go kaggie!! he deserved that!! totally!

So tragically beautiful...I like how you give brief history on the characters without taking from the plot or the characters' strength.

Nice disclaimer at the end there. I like the darkness, and think that that situation is, in fact, very possible. I didn't see any mistakes, and people were in character for the situation. So yay. Now to write that 800-10 word review on a book that I haven't finished yet. Yeah, it's due tomorrow, and is worth 30% of our grade. I'm a bad, bad person.
Sayonara

~~Silv~~

O_o eh...poor Kagome? lol

Dis one is very dark...very creepy...yet another angle into the mind of Kagome

Well done, and I'm absolutely certain that you're not crazy. Really, I'm sure. If you need to talk about him, I'll be glad to listen.

SHE'S SO EVIL! i love it when people make her evil... i have this weird thing, where i always choose to hero worship the badguys (ex: DARTH VADER IS MY HERO) so, evil kagome, kudos to you! and, totally kickass writing. really. it was nicely written, with lots of fancy decription. i am in awe!

This was a really dark story I didn't like the fact that I went crazy and killed Inuyasha though killing kikyo is one of the best daydreams in the world. Hehe It was on the other hand nicely writen a bit short but didn't need to be much longer. I give you on a scale from 1-10 a 10! ^-^
-Kagome