""It may have been." Dumbledore sighed. "I have recently heard evidence from the centaur herds that a young foul had gone missing just last week.""

I think you meat foal instead of foul! Foal's are cute while foul's are bad! :) ROFL!

JimS

""Harry, in the past I've wanted you so badly than I could bare."

I think that should be bear. Bare would be naked! :) ROFL!

JimS

""Fur Elise?" Hermione said to Harry"

While I am not a huge Beethoven fan, I do like Fur Elise for some reason as well as some of his other works.

I am way more into Bach's organ music! :) I also like most rock music before 1980 as well as most "New Age" music. And Taiko! :)

JimS

"Thank you for being so patient with me and not coming after me with pitchforks and torches."

I would NOT do that to you!

What I would do is shoot you in one of your kneecaps with a .22 pistol! :) That way you would hurt for the rest of your life!

Actually, I would NOT do that at all.

JimS

I truly hate stories with Hermione playing Quidditch. Harry was born to it, but Hermione wasn't. Can't Harry have one thing that he is better at than Hermione? Regarless, I'm dropping your story.

love the name not too keen on the plot but only red ch1 so far

really enjoyed ur story and cant wait to see how it ends and hope you update soon

interesting... i have liked your story, i feel as though you have set up things and then not explored them fully for example harry living in crookshanks for a month ( you barely mentioned anything that happened wrt him being a cat or how hermione felt after finding out) but overall pretty good, i would like to see where its going.

Overall this is good. I suppose my main recommendation might be to tighten the stories focus. The idea of Voldemort starting an Ultimate war seemed to come out of left field, while the good guys have seen a steady progression of power with the ending highly expected to be Harry, possibly with Hermione, using the Phoenix Blaze. Also, it almost seems like the child helping Hermione in her dreams is perhaps a bit too much help.

Beyond that it seems you have three interesting characters in this story, and I'm not including Ron or Dumbledore. Everyone else seems almost as a background character. Now I'm not saying all the characters need developed more, but perhaps we should, on occasion, see the point of view of one in Voldemort's camp, and then maybe one other like perhaps Luna. For one, I can't quite figure out what Luna sees in Ron. Finally, as for as characters go, you introduce Blaise, but then he doesn't act particularly Slytherin, or really do much later.

Again, overall this is a good story so far.

Very good story i hope the nex chapter will comme soon.

This story is quite interesting. It seems to build with each chapter, but without getting boring or anything like that. I hope that you can update this story sometime soon.

One question though: Just why/how can Professor Gryphon be able to change shapes?

wonderful story, Gryphon rocks

Harry is such a boy. But a boy that knows what coloured eyes the two girls in his life have. Very rare. But not too smart to pick up that the Lioness was totally Hermione... Heh.

Please update soon

WHA! Awesome. Ok. In the future, I'll leave one word reviews because GAH i totally need to get to the next chapter. AH. Exciting.