 Blue Eyed Dragon Girl 2006-11-23 . chapter 2Oh boy! This could cause some serious trouble... but maybe Sky will finally realize being a leader isn't as easy as he thought. Great story so far! Can't wait to see what's up next! |
 kikos ai 2006-05-25 . chapter 2I read this a while back before I joined. I really hope you continue it, its fantastic and well conceived. The characters are believable as is the setup.
Oh and if you need a beta, I'm all for it!
-Kikos from LJ |
 Lady Katana4544 2006-02-14 . chapter 2Very interesting so now the Rangers are opposite of what their colors are supposed to be cool! good job! |
 MelodyAustin 2005-08-20 . chapter 2this was such a good story so far. When are you going to update! |
 cmar 2005-07-12 . chapter 2Didn't even see that this had another chapter when I started it yesterday... Another great action sequence! Loved the free-for-all, I could just see Jack in particular diving into that fight-turned-virtual-reality-game. Very vivid. (And I noticed Kat's use of 'Swan' in her authorization, nice touch.)
The rest was a very nice blend of lively dialogue, good character interactions, the beginnings of an intriguing murder mystery, more action, and even some humor. Very definitely looking forward to more!
I think your spelling and grammar are quite excellent, but if you're still looking for a beta, email me. |
 Funky In Fishnet 2005-07-12 . chapter 2LOL I laughed so much at this story. I'd really love to know where its going. U have the characters down really well. Keep it up :- ) |
 garnetred 2005-07-11 . chapter 2It should be interesting to find out exactly how Sky and Jack will explain them switching morphers. Excellent story. PLease update soon. |
 cmar 2005-07-11 . chapter 1I also like seeing some action in a PR story - and this was very well done.
What an interesting premise! I liked the confrontation between Sky and Jack, very true to both their personalities. Also the little reference to Sky's father was a good touch.
One thing, it could have used a scene break, but possibly ffn ate your formatting. Anyway, I hope you continue this soon. |
 Anastasia Athene 2005-07-11 . chapter 2"Z had her head raised towards the sky, with a look of long-suffering the others could just imagine."
HAHA! I laughed out loud when the switch occurred. Seeing everyone's reaction was classic. I am really enjoying this story--it's an interesting premise, and you're doing a great job with it! Keep writing! |
 NeoVenus22 2005-07-10 . chapter 2Can I just say yay? I love this story. I love the brilliant characterization, and the mystery, and the action (so few PR stories actually have action in them, despite what the series is about), and the use of unmorphed powers (squee!). Everyone is just so in character, and it's funny, and I honestly can't wait to see what's going to happen next. |
 Catilin Helinski 2005-07-10 . chapter 2 ". . . Jack, still in the middle, wearing the SPD Blue outfit, and wearing it several inches shorter than its normal occupant . . ."
Hee. I'm really lovin' this! The reaction from the others was brilliant.
Can't wait for more! |
 garnetred 2005-07-10 . chapter 1Excellent story. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon. |
 BloomingViolets 2005-07-07 . chapter 1Oh boy this story is so interesting! What an excellent start! It'll be interesting to see sky as the red ranger and jack as the blue lol i hope you update this story soon!
-Thanks for all the compliments on my story lol I'm glad you're enjoying it! The next update should be soon, I've already gotten it halfway written =) |
 Catilin Helinski 2005-07-04 . chapter 1 Very interesting . . .
Will the girls find out? And what about Kat? Can't wait for the next part. |