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Blue Eyed Dragon Girl
2006-11-23 . chapter 2
Oh boy! This could cause some serious trouble... but maybe Sky will finally realize being a leader isn't as easy as he thought. Great story so far! Can't wait to see what's up next!
kikos ai
2006-05-25 . chapter 2
I read this a while back before I joined. I really hope you continue it, its fantastic and well conceived. The characters are believable as is the setup.

Oh and if you need a beta, I'm all for it!

-Kikos from LJ
Lady Katana4544
2006-02-14 . chapter 2
Very interesting so now the Rangers are opposite of what their colors are supposed to be cool! good job!
MelodyAustin
2005-08-20 . chapter 2
this was such a good story so far. When are you going to update!
cmar
2005-07-12 . chapter 2
Didn't even see that this had another chapter when I started it yesterday... Another great action sequence! Loved the free-for-all, I could just see Jack in particular diving into that fight-turned-virtual-reality-game. Very vivid. (And I noticed Kat's use of 'Swan' in her authorization, nice touch.)

The rest was a very nice blend of lively dialogue, good character interactions, the beginnings of an intriguing murder mystery, more action, and even some humor. Very definitely looking forward to more!

I think your spelling and grammar are quite excellent, but if you're still looking for a beta, email me.
Funky In Fishnet
2005-07-12 . chapter 2
LOL I laughed so much at this story. I'd really love to know where its going. U have the characters down really well. Keep it up :- )
garnetred
2005-07-11 . chapter 2
It should be interesting to find out exactly how Sky and Jack will explain them switching morphers. Excellent story. PLease update soon.
cmar
2005-07-11 . chapter 1
I also like seeing some action in a PR story - and this was very well done.

What an interesting premise! I liked the confrontation between Sky and Jack, very true to both their personalities. Also the little reference to Sky's father was a good touch.

One thing, it could have used a scene break, but possibly ffn ate your formatting. Anyway, I hope you continue this soon.
Anastasia Athene
2005-07-11 . chapter 2
"Z had her head raised towards the sky, with a look of long-suffering the others could just imagine."

HAHA! I laughed out loud when the switch occurred. Seeing everyone's reaction was classic. I am really enjoying this story--it's an interesting premise, and you're doing a great job with it! Keep writing!
NeoVenus22
2005-07-10 . chapter 2
Can I just say yay? I love this story. I love the brilliant characterization, and the mystery, and the action (so few PR stories actually have action in them, despite what the series is about), and the use of unmorphed powers (squee!). Everyone is just so in character, and it's funny, and I honestly can't wait to see what's going to happen next.
Catilin Helinski
2005-07-10 . chapter 2
". . . Jack, still in the middle, wearing the SPD Blue outfit, and wearing it several inches shorter than its normal occupant . . ."

Hee. I'm really lovin' this! The reaction from the others was brilliant.

Can't wait for more!
garnetred
2005-07-10 . chapter 1
Excellent story. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon.
BloomingViolets
2005-07-07 . chapter 1
Oh boy this story is so interesting! What an excellent start! It'll be interesting to see sky as the red ranger and jack as the blue lol i hope you update this story soon!

-Thanks for all the compliments on my story lol I'm glad you're enjoying it! The next update should be soon, I've already gotten it halfway written =)
Catilin Helinski
2005-07-04 . chapter 1
Very interesting . . .

Will the girls find out? And what about Kat? Can't wait for the next part.
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