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| saidtheirnevers 2007-09-21 ch 1, | abuseOkay, you made me cry this time. It's so sad! The parentheses just make everything better, and worse, and just...I feel too much to ever take anything seriously. I laugh too much, cry too easily...or don't I? And Sakura will forever be dying, she will forever be in pain, she will never forget and no one will ever forgive. I love you, and I love your writing, but I hate it so much because it's TRUE, Goddamnit, it's TRUE. This is why I love Sakura so much, and why I try to defend Sasuke: because she can't, she knows too much to ever be able to say anything about him that is good; she knows there is no good, and no evil either. "She closes her eyes and waits for death." "And he talks and his voice is the hidden ending..." "...reaching the unseen shore at last..." Will she never be happy, even in her afterlife? Tell me she'll be in paradise, but tell me she'll suffer. Tell me she's happy but tell me she's crying, like I still am. |
| DemonGIrl11 2006-09-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseI didn't really get it. |
| yukibozu 2006-09-06 ch 1, | abuseWait a sec... So basically Sakura is molesting Sasuke and at the end shes, dying? im kinda confused. Oh well. It was interesting. =) |
| Saint Mirror 2006-05-30 ch 1, | abuseshe raped him...hn...interesting. |
| Shazia 2006-01-24 ch 1, anon. | abusedid she just rape sasuke? |
| KiwiTenjou 2006-01-06 ch 1, | abusethat was beautiful... |
| Rayna15700 2005-11-23 ch 1, | abusewow i am supprised at the intenisity of her feelings tworsa her and how you make the seen come aluve in my mind. |
| Only Secret 2005-07-06 ch 1, | abuseFreaky but great at the same moment. It's really sad that it turned out like this, the relationship between the two. but I must say, its always the dark/morbid ones that draw ppl in |
| shir0-chan 2005-07-06 ch 1, | abusethis is very good...love it |
| sakunade 2005-07-03 ch 1, | abuseLoved it. *_* Very, very much. |