I LUV it and ur sequel is good, too!

Pretty good story my friend i enjoyed it

I liked this story a lot. The ending as you said was not very good,, however I also saw one other mistake that you made. You had Kanami call Kazuma Kazikun when it is correctly spelled Kazukun. I would also like to read a sequal to this FF. Thank you for reading this review.

CG1 Temporal

Please do! A sequeal sounds Awsome!

MARVELOUS! JUST MARVELOUS! *Claps Hands.*

This chapter was awsome! You did a very good job! Can't wait for the sequel!

Come on, do you even have to ask me to do this? Heck, I wanted one from chapter 14 after I saw what happened to everyone. I'm assuming that the projects are the new Alters, wonder how they'll use there alters, especially lvl 2 and 3

Why was she made into a holy member, and I see sequel potential in this. Also, why did Pharaoh create a male Commander robot to tell the others that she would be made into one.

-I thought it would have a better ending but that's ok. nice job though... ^^

EXCELLENT!

hm I wonder what she is thinking of doing? She really is a good fighter Im amaized but kinda creepy for what she uses it well anyway please hurry with the next chapter its good!

I really like your story! At first I was afraid to read it because I don't like Slaughter stuff but I gave it a whirl anyway and I really enjoyed it! Hurry up with the next chapter! =P

MARVELOUS!

IT IS GOOD BUT DO A NEW CHAPTER!

If you lack in action and fighting scenes, I know the lad for you. AIM you later I will. This happens to be a good chapter, but I was hoping for a little more than that with Kanami. and i'll give ten bucks to say that Pharaoh knew about his girlfriend.