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DemyxFangirl 5/11/12 . chapter 9
"To beauty," Riku said softly. "Which doesn't mean a goddamn thing." They drank. "Unless you're as ugly as Sora," Axel added, as soon as they'd all lowered their cups. "Homely, jerk," Sora said, grinning. He squeezed Riku's hand. "Isn't that right? I'm homely?" "You're perfect," Riku told him, and Sora broke into smile and leaned in to brush their lips together.

That part was SO FREAKING ADORABLE! You broke my Squee Scale! XD
Brandon R 4/11/12 . chapter 1
FUCKING HILARIOUS XD
Soralover231 4/6/12 . chapter 8
OMG, please just make another one of these,I get soo emotional listening to Sora X Riku Yaoi music (7:32 music youtube) lol, gosh please another one already XD it is just THAT awsome!
Soralover231 4/6/12 . chapter 6
Axel smiled sweetly. "I love you much, much more than I love chocolate."

"I know," said Roxas, pulling him down against the mattress. "Chocolate doesn't kiss back."

"But it does have nuts."

"Asshole!"

Lol awsome one, even though it's true XD
Soralover231 4/5/12 . chapter 1
I just totally love this story, i'm re reading it again, it is such an awsome story that I really love it, this time i'll see if I can locate any spelling or puncuation errors, lol if i'm spelling bad probably because i'm still kinda tired XD!
soralover231 3/31/12 . chapter 9
Man, you got a real talent for writing this kind of stuff, god I wish you made books on this, because well... It's pretty much i'm in the same situation and only difference is, I don't know if they like me equally, problom is, there is bloody 3 of them _, gosh life is soo confusing, I wish my life could be like Riku's, you can suffer but in the end, it is all worth it.
soralover231 3/31/12 . chapter 8
omg the ending is too awsome... I swear if you wrote a book on this I would buy like every copy!, I've been staying up till 4 a.m. reading all the kingdom hearts ones XD, super huge fan!
soralover231 3/31/12 . chapter 6
lol that was awsome ending!
Soralover231 3/31/12 . chapter 4
omg that was an awsome ending, but why no questions I mean, mabey the ending for that like "I don't want to know" and just walk off, wouldn't that seem bit better for it? But still, great job on it.
Hachi-miitsu 7/27/11 . chapter 3
x3 Gyaaah I just giggled so hard I think I gave myself a hernia :3 This is not a fangirl speaking. I don't have anything against homosexual relationships because I've been in quite a few myself. But I am a huuuuge fan of bitingly clever syntax and this is positively the shiznet! Thank you for putting this out there :3 It made my day a little brighter!
Sayuri-Suzuki95 7/26/11 . chapter 9
I say it's time to make a toast to YOU. This was absolutely WONDERFULL! I loved it from start to finish! And when I get the time (hell, I'll MAKE time) I'm going to check out your other stories as well. I just KNOW that they're going to be great!
Sayuri-Suzuki95 7/26/11 . chapter 8
Is it even possible for something, ANYTHING to be this amazingly good? Wonderful job! Bravo, bravo! Oh, how I hope you write a sequal!
Sayuri-Suzuki95 7/26/11 . chapter 7
*Bows down* I'm not worthy, I'm not worthy! I praise you, oh Goddess of writing!
Sayuri-Suzuki95 7/26/11 . chapter 6
Damn...This was just...Just...DAMN.
Sayuri-Suzuki95 7/26/11 . chapter 5
This was amazing. I swear. Just freakin' amazing.
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