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Ebony Cream 7/11/01 . chapter 1
um... the end?
Ms Spider 4/17/01 . chapter 1
OUCH! YOU SQUISHED ME! But I forgive you because it's great short story! Well done, despite the heartless murder of a defenseless spider. Next story...use BIGGER TYPE! Us spiders have trouble seeing that small stuff even though I clicked to enlarge it a couple times it was still too small.
Janet Brayden 4/9/01 . chapter 1
Very good. I can imagine Marissa trying unsuccessfully to hide a grin at that one. Just like she always does when she's got something on Gary.

More! More!
foofy mcfoofersons 4/8/01 . chapter 1
Awww, cute!
Aurelia Violet 4/7/01 . chapter 1
Hahaha! What was that? :c) Hehe even on TV I thought the "McGinty eight-leg" was kinda funny, but you made it funnier! Spider-boy, lol...Hey, in the episode "Phantom at the Opera", Chuck calls Gary "Matilda" and they never say why. Hmm, plot holes here! :c) -Char
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