I think it's well done and easy to read. Keep it up.

it was nice. just... nice. i dunno how ta put it, but its just nice. ^_^;

Very good! I loved it! To admit, I like Miaka in this, she's now finally openin' her eyes. Great job!

;_; -wipes away a tear- Reminds me of me. It was good. Too good..

very nice... sad.. but good! i wouldve probably made her die, but thats just my morbid self! very nice work, and no, i dont think the vocab is too advanced? all happy cheery, annoyingly chipper people have their dark side. (that me!) and believe me, Miaka wouldve died. I love to make poeple cry. Though Miaka nd Hotohori are my fav characteres (it seems like I am one of the few Miaka fans!) i still would killed her. all in all, good story. i like it, yes i do! (soory, my little rurouni slipped in there.... lol, well, i liked it, and ill check back for more of your stuff! I have some SM stuff I have written, in case your interested. A crossover with DBZ. Its ok, in my opinion. From one fanfic writer to the next, kudos on you fic and doomo arigato for bringing it to the fanfictions website! =)

Strangely sweet. Poor Miaka-chan. Sorta trapped isn't she though? You gave me something to think about. Arigatou. *bows*

*applause* I think that it was beautiful! Don't put yourself down! ;) Great work.

Its good! It was pretty depressing, personally Miaka would never think
shes a ditz or anything hehehe.
very good fic though! keep up the good work.

That was interesting! You caught a side of Miaka that people don't think about...and that is what does she feel. It was good...please don't critisize you fics...it wasn't stupid...a suiside does deal with people aspects of themselves...so you did a great job in capturing that! Keep it up! And thanks for reveiwing my story ^_^ Miaka~Tasuki foreva!