Fantastic story! I practicaly cried though the whole thing! Wonderful job!

it was a beautifully well written story, you certainly have talent. i would've liked to see a continuation or a sequel.

awwh! loved the story!1 glad she lived! good story! sad to see it end but good stuff none-the-less!

peace out

*Dunedain Rose Thorn

wow, that was beautiful! i absolutely loved it... thanks ;)

Yay! she woke up.

good job.

you need to write more

The story itself was compelling, but it was very difficult to read with the strange errors continually creeping in. Some of the phrasing was confusing, and better punctuation, grammar, and spelling would certainly help. Please get a beta reader for any future works.

Please for the love of God do NOT kill her! That is all I have read today, if it isnt her dying it is Grissom! NO MORE DEATH!

please make her live...this is such an awesome story

Live Live Live. I love this story but Sara has to live.

LIVE!

She has to live!

lol, ok, its 20 past midnight and I have school in the morning, thats how into your fic i was :-D

Jess x

for he poll: please let her live! Great story by the way! :)

sweet story! Try to put commas just before the end of a dialogue, though... but other than that, it's totally awesome!

omg! love the story! very well done!

LET SARAH LIVE!

hey i just fond this story today but i like it...and i say live too