Actually there's nothing wrong with this chapter. I loved how Kent stays the same and trys to leave. That's JUST like him! Please keep up the good work. God bless!

Hah. Poor Sain.

It's not your best work, but considering you had Writer's Block (which should be in the Medical Dictionaries), I think you managed rather well!

Keep up the great work!

Cheers,
-Manna

Well, I finally got around to finishing this, and I must say, it's a lot better than I expected. Kent and Lyn were not very out of character at all; you managed to make it all work. That's what makes your stuff so great. The last two chapters of this piece were excellent. The only problem was the inclusion of Sain; he and his scenes definitely felt tacked-on in the end. But other than that, this was fantastic work. I understand that you're working on FE9 now, but please get another FE7 fic going soon! (FE8 was fun, but lacked a strong story, and FE9 just lacked everything that made the others good... Sorry for editorializing in a review, I just wanted to tell you why I don't read your FE9 fics.)

Hee hee. Sain really does deserve it. But knowing him, he will find a way out of having responsibility. He'd probably go begging Kent on one knee to keep visiting and helping. But that was so beautiful, how Kent got all caught up in his passion and kissed Lyn. *Dreamy sigh* I hope to read another Fire Emblem story from you.

Great story. You spelled Emphasis wrong though, minor mishap. Sain is funny :)

Well... this review is certainly a late one. I do have to apologize for this... I did see this epilogue awhile ago, but I told myself I'd review it later and then promptly forgot about it. Hope this can make up for it slightly...

You've always had a distinct writing style, one that I've never quite seen duplicated anywhere else on this site. It was definitely present in this story, and it definitely made this story a lot more enjoyable to read. As always, you've got your occasional humor, your touching romance scenes, and a little bit of your trademark cheesiness in here too. :P It's all very well put together, and you've definitely got a good story on your hands here.

All in all, it's nice to see that you're still writing. :) I haven't gotten a chance to check out your new story "Ribbon" yet, but I'll make sure to take a look at it when I get the time. College is a bit time-consuming, as you see. :/

Keep up the good work,
~TheOneAndOnlyT~

Great story..funny and sweet.

Looking foward to your Rennac/L'Arachel Fic.

Oh mi gosh! That was so adorable! ^_^

yep. better ending that time around. =^_0= haha stupid sain. serves him right for being some stupid idiotic pervert... *glares at sain, he hides in a corner* anyway, i loved your story!

I barely remembered the fic! Luckily, it clicked in before I ignored it. Anyway, good work. I loved the joke thing, for I do not like Sain and enjoy seeing him frightened. But above that was the part where Kent actually said he loved Lyn; it was one of those times where you just wanna combine "BWAHAHAHA!" with "AW!", but can't. Again, great chapter.

*claps*

Brilliant, bloody brilliant.

Wow... That was a Beatuiful Kent/Lyn!

Hi FireEdge~! It's been so long since I've reviewed one of your stories! I really missed doing so. After Stray Arrow ended I was really sad. But now I can read this story! Yay! And I really like this one too! Is it going to be long like your previous story?

Hey Edge...
You haven't heard from me in a while huh. I developed the worst sought of writers block ever developed and I didn't come to Fanfiction for a long time.
It's great to see your still writing amazing fics, never missing detail and keeping the chapters generally pleasing.
I'm not sure if I'm gonna continue Cupids Arrow or not... I may do, I'm losing morale and I lost my game data I was basing the story off. Could you give me an opinion next chapter?
Just wandering, but how come Kent's been Steward for a while now and Lyn has JUST gotten back to her house in chapter 3? It's like two different time zones. Nevermind though, it's still a great story!
I'd also like to join one of your RPs, but I haven't got FE8 yet being in England and all, so it be good if you could advise me on which RP I could/should join.
Thanks in advance, hope to see the next chapter soon.
Ragnarok-Legend

WAHH! I WANT MORE! MAJOR CLIFFIE! BUT THE RACE IS ON, WHO WILL CONFESS FIRST! YOU BETTER UPDATE SOON OR HARM WILL BEFALL SOMEONE... most likely my evil dog... ANYWAY, SORRY FOR THE LACK OF CAPS LOCK, THE ENDING DID SUCK THO'.