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| Ming-sama 2008-06-17 ch 1, | abuseIt's late here in Germany,so I won't be able to come further than thefirst Chapter of the sequel, 'specially after reading Untold truths the whole afternoon. The authors note at the beginning and the former read 'ON HIATUS' doesn't make me to enthusiastic to continue reading- I always get in a severe mood when a story suddenly stops at the beginning and doesn't stand under a all too lucky star to be continued... anyhow, the first chapter nevertheless was great and surely fans a craving for more =3 Kai and Rei seem to be a nice couple and on good terms (despite the teasing... then again, that puts the spice into it, ne?) and the fact that there will probably will be a splitting on (hopefully) just short terms (and hopefully not a parting as THE couple) Funny thing is, I like switching of 'tala' and 'ata' concerning Yuriy :3 and I like it. So, I'm gonna put this ficlet on alert and hope for an update *waves* grettings, ming |
| Yaoi Fangirl nr. 1 2008-05-10 ch 3, | abuseOkay okay when are you going too update this fiction. I loved Untold truths. Have you given up on this one or what? It would be nice to know where this story is on you "to-do-list". Anyway love the fiction, and I hope you will update soon. P.S sorry for the crappy english^^' I'm danish |
| Serlene 2008-03-08 ch 3, | abuseI know that's it's been two years since you last updated this, but as I just finished reading the prequel to this story yesterday, I just can't stop hoping that you'll continue this. Though I will understand if you don't but it'd be so great if you did!! And on a side note, would Ata and/or Bryan meet someone?? curious. Anyways, I really like your writing style, and you have some great stories:) //Serlene |
| CrzyFreek09 2008-02-04 ch 3, | abuseI can't wait to find out what comes next!! Please update soon! I loved the first story and I excited about this one!! |
| thegreatwhitewolf 2007-11-15 ch 3, | abuseI don't know the difference. He he he. That's okay though. I'm thinking about who you could possibly be referring to in those two scenes. I think you know what I'm talking about. *thinks* I have my ideas but I'll stay silent in case that I'm wrong. Though I wasn't when it came to Our First Noel and Bryan and Tala's relationship... |
| thegreatwhitewolf 2007-11-15 ch 2, | abuse“RAY! KAI! GET YOUR HORNY BUTTS OUT HERE NOW!” That made me laught my butt off. Personally, I'm glad you got rid of Dizzy. She was annoying. Oh and by the way, I LOVE what you did with Tala in Untold Truths. It was a very good characterization of him. He really did seem to have human qualitites at the end of Season 3 (that's basically all I've seen except for some episodes of season 1 and 1 of Season 2. Honestly, I like how they look a lot better in Season 1 rather than in Season 3. Don't mind my ramblings. I liked the part about the horny Russians too. That made me smile. I personally think that Tala hasn't lost all his humanity and it certainly shows in Season 3. Your portrayal of him in Untold Truths is very believable. Even the part about him with glasses. Especially the part about him with the glasses. I haven't attempted to write any Beyblade fics yet. I'm still a long ways off from that. But I'll keep watching the series (on my laptop because I do not own a TV) and reading. Sorry about all my ramblings. |
| thegreatwhitewolf 2007-11-15 ch 1, | abuseI just started watching Season 3. I think I know who the masked blader is. A certain someone... |
| RoxasIsReal13 2007-11-02 ch 3, anon. | abuse... It's been almost 2 years since you updated Stand By Me... WHY GOD, WHY!? *commits suicide* |
| Maria-Lilly Kon 2007-09-18 ch 3, | abuseo cliff higher... update please! this fic has me hooked, and I promised myself not to read it on a school day (cuz I'd just end up not sleeping and that would be bad...) |
| BloodRedViolet 2007-09-14 ch 1, | abusehey this is a great fic so i hope it comes of hiatus soon oh and you can find beyblade episodes on both youtube and a website called both in english and in japanese so if you cant find them then you can there :) |
| tired of waiting 2007-07-04 ch 3, anon. | abuseeither update or discontinue, please! |
| iShiznitch 2007-07-02 ch 3, | abuseOnce again you amaze me. I must say, I am... ...Happy that this isn't as angst ridden as your other sequel. Not that I'm complaining, because I LOVE angst, and you write it so well, but, I don't feel like crying now. I'm looking forward to see everybody from it's predecessor (sp?) Looking forward to see what Kai does... How the battles go... Ata/Tala's 'ness', and how he's been doing... ...and those evil scenes that can only make sense if you update! So generally, I'm looking forward to a break in the hiatus. I am fully aware that life sucks, and we must all deal and suffer with it, but know that me, and hundreds of others, are looking forward to the next chapter, to make hectic days that much better ^.^ I am ... in a giddy mood now... thanks to your efforts in writing these wonderous things. Thank you~ Always, Rio |
| KDLizzy's Gay Cookies 2007-06-17 ch 3, | abuseinteresting. . very nice |
| darkstaress92 2007-04-17 ch 3, | abuseYes, I would like to know what's going on with the two little scenes. But I won't know if you don't ever update. Do you still plan on continuing the story? I'm curious. And as bad as this sounds, I really want to read the airplane scene to see if Rei's going to cry. Even though I'm pretty sure I know the answer to that. I really love this story, in fact I just reread it after rereading Untold Truths. I hope I'm not asking for too much, but I would really like another update soon-ish. |
| Hallas 2007-03-26 ch 3, | abusethis story has been dormant for a year! more than! update soon, k? *huggles* ~Hallas |