 temporalcontrol 2008-09-29 . chapter 12this is an awesome story dont let it die! keep up the good work |
 temporalcontrol 2008-09-29 . chapter 7awesome chapter very well written! i like the story as a whole! |
 temporalcontrol 2008-09-29 . chapter 4very good writing! i cannot even see any turns or twists before they happen. I am impressed keep up the good work |
 amethyst-dreams27 2008-06-30 . chapter 12This story is so good! It is prety original (except when it gets all melodramatic and all). Your style of writing is awesome. So... you planning on finishing this anytime soon?
Ammie^^ |
 Daughter of a demon 2008-06-22 . chapter 12for the first time in a long time I am at a loss for words. i absolutely loved this story so far, and you can really tell i loved it because i haven't reviewed each and every chapter. usually, when i really really like a story, i don't review until i'm finished with it because i don't want to waste time in between chapters to review. but anydangway, i really hope you update this soon, i simply can't wait to read what happens next!
Favorites'd!
-DoaD |
 nabbi 2008-04-19 . chapter 12 Jen: I AM VERY SAD!
nabbi: (rolls her eyes) tell us something we dont know
Jen: (glares) YOU KNOW WHAT I MEANT!
Jen: PLZ PLZ PLZ update soon! We love this story! Right Nabbi?
nabbi: whatever
Jen: (sighs) dont be offended she is PMSing at the moment, or maybe she always is ^.^
nabbi: WHAT DID YOU SAY?!?!?!?!?!?!?
Jen:AH! PLZ UPDATE KAY! (being chased around the room by nabbi with a baseball bat) |
 Regina lunaris 2008-04-01 . chapter 12um hi! well i just have to say that i love your story Beauty is Within Us and i really hope you find the time to finish it becuase it really is worth finishing. so good luck in whatever you decide. |
 omenomous 2008-03-22 . chapter 12 why the hell would you stop? and it was so damn good too... |
 boynetough 2008-02-23 . chapter 12omg...im so glad raven didnt die, but why did she have to be kidnapped?! ahh! update soon please! |
 Socially Suicidal 2007-08-05 . chapter 12why is this the last one?? WHY?!?! lol there better be more girlie! |
 Socially Suicidal 2007-08-05 . chapter 11slade, what a fucking pervert that god damn mother fucker! and nothing has even happened yet!! lmfao i was tearing throughout that flash back .. next one is the last ?!?! i HOPE it has an ending, and a good one at that! |
 Socially Suicidal 2007-08-05 . chapter 10DAMN YOU!! the begining scaared me so bad DAMN U!! lol jk but if that happened i just might be damned lol
damn the male species lololol greatt chapter so cute |
 Socially Suicidal 2007-08-05 . chapter 9XD i always liked looking back at historyy lol |
 Socially Suicidal 2007-08-05 . chapter 8lol i love slade, he is so evil lol i KNOW raven is not dead but i am going to read it in fine print... |
 Socially Suicidal 2007-08-05 . chapter 7aw "hope" just like the show, someone did their homeworkk LOL so cutee |