Reviews for Prince of Perisa: Fate of Heaven

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kuropie 2008-07-28 ch 23,	abuseI love your story this is very well written and I love the prince caracter farah too I love anthria she's really strong and I love that
AznPuffyHair 2008-07-23 ch 23,	abuseah, it ends... well, it's nice when it lasted. could do a small epilouge though. as for ur notes, yes, the greeks burn their dead... usually with coins on their eyes or in their mouth (not sure which one is true) as they believe that they'll need the money to pay the boat across the river. As for spartan tradition, warriors either come back carrying their shield, or was carried back on it. that too is true, though i wonder why she didn't simply keep the shield as a momento... probably becuz she needs the mobility. and the part with Persephone is the greek's way of explaining the seasons. Fall and Winter is the time she stays in the underworld and Spring and Summer when she can go out. and no, Persephone didn't stay willingly. i believe it's a pretty one-sided relationship in the start, but she might grew fond of Hades as time goes on. u never kno. they never explain. well, that's all and hopefully we'll get to see more of ur wonderful stories ^^ and i want that preview. so UPDATE SOON! (^.^)
Littleminnie 2008-07-21 ch 23,	abuseWow...that was awesome! Really freakin' cool! Anthria caused me lots of grief because I found myself shouting at her and getting too angry! "Pick up the sword you unreasonable cow!" I love greek mythology too and you've intergrated it so well that it all seems natural. Thankyou for a wonderful reading experience! I read the whole lot in 2 days. :D And PoP most certainely did not get the coverage it deserved. It was genius. Except for that bloody stupid bit near the end in that godforsaken room with the Prince constantly mumbling, "Where are you?" And Farah being a complete cow with her pathetic calls of, "I'm here." and, "Oh. It's so beautiful." "Shall we take a bath together." I was just screaming, "WHERE THE HELL ARE YOU?! WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON!? You better make this worth my while!" (But the cut scene afterwards was my favourite ;D) - Minnie
Angel Sorano 2008-07-21 ch 23,	abuseWell, that was awesome! Sorry I didn't really have enough time right nice review. Anyway very good job, Anthria death was very bittersweet. She was a great character with excellent storyline and it was sad to see her go, but happy that she could finally rest. And I liked how since you didn't really know anything about Persian or India's mythology you put the setting to something that you really knew, and it was fun learning all this stuff about greek mythology too! I was laughing though when I told my cousin that you wanted the Empress of Time to die and he told that the prince actually ends up killing her. So I guess you wish really did come true. Well I can't wait to see how Farah and Prince's Family will take it having their children fall in love with the enemy.
x-Tangled-Up-In-You-x 2008-07-21 ch 23,	abuseOnly the epilogue left! I'm going to miss this fic - it's been a great read! I hope you make the ending nice and happy! No more deaths please, they are too sad! XD Can't wait to read the epilogue! And can you believe they are making a film of the Sands of time?! Great job! :)
Angel Sorano 2008-07-21 ch 22,	abuseWoot! This was awesome! It's very good and I can't wait to see the end!
Littleminnie 2008-07-19 ch 8,	abuseI've just finished PoP: Sands of Time (I know, it's late but I found it for £4 in a game shop) and I came snooping for fanfictions because the last cut scenes left me saddened. How could they not be together!? I screamed. Your fanfiction has eased my soul. Just what I was looking for! Your writing is really great and your OC is even better and I'm going to read all the other chapters soon but I'm tired because it's 1:38am here! (IN BRITAIN! You seem to like Brits :D) - Minnie
anon 2008-07-10 ch 1, anon.	abuseOMG. I've played the PoP games and they are AWESOME. XD Anyway, your stories are really good. I love them. :)
Cirque du Insanity 2008-06-18 ch 22,	abuseOh my God, I'm so happy! tears of joy I love you... so much right now! I cannot wait until the next chap!... (but go ahead and take your time wink)
x-Tangled-Up-In-You-x 2008-06-18 ch 22,	abuseThis chapter was great! Well worth the wait! But I can't believe there are only a couple of chapters left :( I love the way in which you describe everything in such detail! It makes the story so vivid - keep up the good work! ~Helen
Sir Pebbles 2008-04-02 ch 20,	abuseHey, Before i begin, i want to start with: You dont know me, i dont know you ... much. Here we go: i am making you a promise that i WILL (WILL WILL WILL!) read this story BEFORE the end of the year! Mwa ha ha! thats my promise to you. I read the first three bits ( i think!) and found it very well lay out, interesting. Out of all i read, my favourite part is when you see the prince at the table, and that barlady is talking to him. Ha ha, you make him out as such a treasure! sigh You seem to know your history. Greek, is it? ANYway, sorry to waste your time with this stopid note, and ill let you get back to your life. P.S. Good luck with Uni (if, that is, you ARE still there. if not, havent i just made a fool of myself!) TTFN - AJHowrianickeven :)
Sakura123 2008-03-27 ch 21,	abuseSorry for the extremely late Review (I read the chapter then totally forgot to review... then drfited elsewhere): That aside, I re-read this chapter and I still enjoy it. I loved and was slightly irritated by how, Anthria just ignored everyone and made a dash for Capetrion. She meant she was going to put an end to his life, this time. Farah's second "untimely death" had me doing a total flashback on the time Farah was pushed off a bridge in SOT (she was too close the sand monster and I was stuck in a corner. Next you know, I get gutted, and Farah's getting shoved over the bridge outside the mess hall and I'm hitting Rewind). Totally unrelated circumstances, but that's occured to me. But, yay, Dagger of Time usage is always a blast! All in all, I enjoyed this chapter! Update Soon! Sakura123
Ruingaraf 2008-02-06 ch 21,	abuseNice job. Just one thing that I found 'As long as there is oxygen in these lungs...' is inaccurate because the Greeks beleived that the soul was inhaled and exhaled through the nose, and that was what breathing was. Just thought I'd point that out.
AznPuffyHair 2008-02-03 ch 21,	abuseso the dagger does have its use... although the whole substituting energy for sand is kind of far fetch? not sure. ur theory, ur story. Anyway, good job with the whole thing. I really do wonder if the prince can do that: staying in place when the time rewind. He can slow time, yes, but when time rewind, so should he right? UPDATE SOON! (^.^)
bluetinkerbell 2008-02-01 ch 21,	abusehahaha nice comeback chapter :D uber sexy haha

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