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| Jaide DM 2007-07-15 ch 1,  | abuseI really liked this one shot. I think you got both chibi Seth and mini Ryan down well. Ryan's already a boy of few words, and Seth talks to make noise. Perfect. Good pretense for it, and you got Dawn down well. The origin of Captain Oats, revealed. I noticed you're keeping up with my fic, and if you continue you'll get yourself a little Captain Oats Cameo as well when Chapter Four goes up. Good writing. |
| JH 2006-10-05 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was so sweet i love Seth & Ryan fics write more |
| Dogsbody 2005-07-05 ch 1, | abuseWow! The Idea of Ryan and Seth, meeting as Six year olds; and having that one encounter, be the reason that Seth gets Captain Oats. I like it. It's a plausible idea, just feel bad for Ryan as a Child; with a Mother that emotionally abuseive. If there's a Chapter Two to this Story, I will be looking forward to reading it! |
| Rainygal 2005-07-05 ch 1, | abuseaw, that was really sweet, loved loved, loved the last line! xx |
| adambrody10 2005-07-05 ch 1, | abusehahha some things never change. seth still wont shut up and ryan just takes it all in. i loved this, you should do a followup on seth telling ryan how he got captain oats, and maybe them remembering |
| don't think about it 2005-07-05 ch 1, | abuseHahahaha that was cute. Really believable too, because what sixteen-year-old would remember meeting someone when only six? I like the Capt. Oats introduction and Summer playing Nintendo. |
| Callie-Cat 2005-07-05 ch 1, | abuseAw! That story is so adorable! I absolutely loved it! Great job! ~CC |
| jenskyies 2005-07-05 ch 1, | abuseAw, that was sweet. I could just imagine little Seth sounding like that, all hyper, and Ryan, already monosyllabic. I like your Dawn, well the glimpse we get of her, threatening her son with the police. So awful! Nice little one-shot. |
| Cohen-girl 2005-07-05 ch 1, | abuseAww what a cute story!! I could just imagine this scene.. Mini Seth's and Ryans.. cute.. I liked it! Good work! |
| Laugh-a-Lot Bear 2005-07-05 ch 1, | abuseI really like your story. It's really well written and I like that Ryan and Seth had met years ago (and that it was Ryan who made Seth want to get Captain Oats: cool idea.) |
| Yes. I am evil-oh well 2005-07-04 ch 1, | abuseI totally read the last line. I am writing this review for fun, and because it seems as if you haven't recieved any yet. Poor you. The last line was great. Ha ha. Horses are fun. You know what else is fun? Answering questions. CrazyMack gives me questions. Why can't you? Because you're not Crazy like my CrazyMack. Nope. Thanks for reading this review. I'll send you more later. SarCasTic. |