Monsters, HOLEs, warp zones. I can handle those. Blue Cross paying for Mary's medical bills? Sir, you overestimate my ability to suspend disbelief.

Very well writen, but James killed himself at the end of SH2. That was the cannon ending.

i really enjoyed the storytelling the use of the words and the overall story brillient keep up the good work.

O.O I'm very impressed...it must have taken a large amount of dedication to accurately and (very well might I add) capture the true...hum...essence?...of SH2. BRAVO!

Just finished this, and I have got to say, WOW! You did a fantastic job of translating the game into novel format. I think you really got inside of James' head, and your writing made everything just as tense, terrifying and heartbreaking as it should be! All of your embellishments flowed naturally into the story and enhanced it.

James is a complex character and my personal favorite of the SH protagonists so far, and while you went with a more favorable depiction of him than many do, you still brought out all of his pain, determination, and inherent human fallibility.

A fabulous read, all in all, and one I plan to reread many times! You sir, have joined the ranks of my favorite fan-authors, right next to Stefen Gagne and Mark Latus.

I read the first ten chapters of your new revision (all that is out as of this writing) rather than read the old version, so I'm afraid I can''t compare them, but I'm looking forward to your further revisions, and can't wait to see how you improve on this masterpiece. :)

Outstanding, in my opinion. You really have made the story of Silent Hill 2 your own. The best Silent Hill FanFic I've ever read.

this looks pretty cool, but i notice the first part is named after the first part of The Shining lol not saying its bad, but just wanted to point out that i noticed, but its good to find someone who has done

YO you are ** awesome.
I say this not because you were able to completely and in a most fluid fashion not only novelize but bring more grandeur to silent hill 2, but because the way you write is amazing.

This was so good I cried, several times throughout James' harrowing tale. If you are bored, played the game, or just want a fantastic readI honestly recommend this to you. Good job!

it's very good.

Very very good.



But James doesn't curse one time throughout all of silent hill 2 except for damn and hell (i think) so it sounded (or read) weird to me.

I remember reading this before it was finished - many chapters, one evening, I was that fascinated.

I will re-read it now.

You really are an amazing writer.

This was by far the greatest fan version of Silent Hill 2 ever. Everything was described in a great way, and tho some changes were made... they made it easier to tell as a story. Leaving every video game aspect in this written version would be really mundane, so the changes you made are welcome. Once again, greatest fan version ever!

Absolutely fantastic. I actually got chills on some of the parts tht I remember when I played through the game... and I loved the monster descriptions and the precipice of instanity that James teetered upon. Well done!

Wow... wow! salinger anyone? Absoloutly fantastic, well done man.

This was, by far, one of the most excellent stories I've ever had the chance to read. Thank you for writing it, I'll keep an eye out for any of your original works.

Sincerely,
Ziri O.