those are nice little stories - although "nice" isn't the right word XD i feel for wyatt - the poor guy. hopefully you'll write more of those one-shots or perhaps a longer story. keep writing.

This was a very well writen Wyatt/Chris story. I liked that Wyatt and Chris never got together because it would be impossible to squeeze all the problems and issues that came with it in the amount of fic you wrote. It wouldn't have been believable. But the way you wrote it was perfect, and I especially like that Wyatt chose not to let his feelings show out of concern for how Chris would view him because way too many Wyatt/Chris stories don't take stuff like that into consideration and it showed that Wyatt's love for Chris was deeper then lust.

oh no oh no please please one more one more just finish the story please please i dont know take the two boy to the next level please

Wow, I love this story!

So much raw emotion, so much confusion, so much angst! What's not to love about it, right?

I like the way you wrote Wyatt, not many people are able to get inside his head the way you did, quite inspiring actually, well done!

This definitely qualifies as one of the few and far between jewels of fan fiction.

aw i hope they get together

I really like this so far. I definitely hope to see more! Poor Wyatt, though. I hope things end up working out for him!

~ Kyra

Absolutely loved this!

Poor Wyatt. :(

I liked how you left it fairly open-ended... Three main possibilities open for those who like 'em. :D

Fantastically written.

Man.. don't stop!! All these forays into evilness due to self hatred makes for some pretty damn good angst! The fact that it concerns my favourite brothers all the better! Any chance of a good long term slash fic?? Cuz I'd love to read that if ur up to writing it. Gen is good and all but still.. The age gap is so little! ^_^ Wonderful writing!

Well, at least he hasn't Turned yet. That has to count for something. Terrific chapter!

wow just brilliant. I wish it didn't end! ^-^

Oh, is that some kind of a premonition on his part... Knowing Chris would end up hating him?

Ah, letting go...I heard that could be a ** to do that. Especially if you are already addicted in the first place.

Best of luck to Wyatt.

Isn't this just dandy. We have Wrath, Envy and Lust. We just four more to complete the set.

My heart goes for Nathan. Pity. The poor Bastard. Oh well, life goes on, that's one demon less in the underworld. (chuckles)

Looks like Wyatt is well on his way spiraling down to the dark path.

Well someone needed to check on the blood pressure. (chuckles) AT least he fixed the mirror. And just knowing that he already had a bad start with things, he has to break the mirror and give himself 7 years of bad luck.

Tsk. Tsk. Look how untamed and unchecked temper can take the out the worst in someone.

I must say, green and red does not match up with his eyes.

I think it is so interesting how well you tell this story and approach the characteders. While I read through you managaged to make me feel incredibly sorry for Wyatt - struggling with something he can't control and which he sort of hates - but also a little afraid for him as well since he's powerful and frustrated love/lust is a dangerous motivator (the demon-hunting he did in Chapter 3 was scary and so real - I could see and understand why it would happen).

I like how you show in little ways that Chris and Wyatt trust eachother completely (e.g. Chris not waking up when Wyatt's in the room or Chris being happier when Wyatt is sleeping in the same room) and how terrible it would feel to Wyatt to think that that trust could be lost. I also love how you portray the different point of views - like Chris in the hug thinking one thing and trying to comfort his brother while Wyatt feels something else and feels LESS comforted with Chris so close.

This is a great story/series - I hope you'll write more.

Wow...seriously, wow. This one-shot actually made me want to cry! It's just... I love Chris and Wyatt together, and Wyatt is going through all this pain cause he loves Chris, but can't tell him... The saddest part was the hug at the end, I think. The whole thing is actually heart-breaking, for me anyway. But maybe I'm jut soppy :P

You're such a brilliant writer, and I LOVE Deep Breathing. In my personal opinion, I think you should write another Wyatt/Chris fic, but one where they eventually get together, cause I doubt it's gonna happen in this right? Well anyway, if you don't, I hope you'll at least do another one-shot for this sometime, because it's amazing.