Ah, this was such a wonderful story! It was heartfelt and intriguing. I agree that it would have been better with the actual conversation thrown in there in between Megatron's thoughts, but sometimes we just have to make due when we don't have a script XD It was just wonderful though! Great job!

Aww I really love this story I wish you'd write more so amazing I love the Bethany/Metatron pairing please write more =)

this is gr8 in the film i wanted those 2 2 get 2gether and now youve done it... gr8 job plz plz plz write more soon

How wonderful! Simply wonderful...excellent work. I think this is best as a one shot, much more poignant that way. I'll watch the scene differently now "knowing" this is going on in Metatron's head! :) Keep writing.

Very well written! *adds to favs*

Wow...deep... Interesting, thought provking, and very well written. Keep up the good work!

"I can’t tell you everything right now, Bethany, but soon, I may regain my voice just to tell you that maybe an egocentric, overbearing, sometimes quite annoyed man who spits his tequila like a camel and doesn’t have a package, just loves you more than he has the words to explain and surely not enough to help you understand."

I hadn't really thought of Metatron as a possible love interest when I first watched the movie, but then I went on fanfic, and read well written fics (LIke this one-wait, I think is the first one I've actuallyread!) and I can totally see it.

I loved that quote, the one at the beginning of the review-so sweet how he is thinking of all the imperfections that would make him memorable to Bethany at the very least.

You're awesome. I would have never seen the Metatron thinking this. It's such a great short story. The only way I was able to read this was that I was so curious to found out what you have written after you read my story, The Unfortunate, The Understood, and reviewed. Thanks for the review, and thanks for a fantastic DOGMA story. Bong...

that was so sweet

Great one-shot on Bethany and Metatron.
I loved it.

very swee. i prefer bethany and bartleby, but this was very nicely done. :)

Really, Not bad.. a good story..
Continue this! write another chapter! ^^