This continues to be a fantastic story!

oh DORME!

I was crossing my fingers the whole time... hoping that Anakin wouldn't be there... but it was inevitable.

very amazing, by the way.

oh no! poor dorme.

i still keep hoping that anakin will come back to the good side but ever chapter makes him dive deeper and deeoer into the darkside.

if only there was a way...

oh well i guess it is just me whishing that luke and leia could have grwon up knowing there parents...

That was an amazing chapter. Dorme certainly did her job well. So sad.

Hopefully the fact that he just killed his only potential source of information will make Anakin realise some of the damage his temper does.

Dorme's death was very evocatively written- good work!

I'm looking forwrad to seeing what Padem intends to do next- update soon.

Aww... that's so sad. I wish Dorme wouldn't have went back but she was a good friend to Padme. I wonder if Vader will find his family before his children reach adulthood or before that. Well, keep up the good work.

Oh my goodness! I love your story, and I the way you allow the characters to continue to grow through the story. update soon!

Do you realize that you are getting better at writing this story with every chapter? This was a strong chapter, especially the ending. Sad yet great. Good work!

wow... I've been reading this story from the beginning... and honestly... it gets better and better with each chapter. I'm literally grabbing my chair and gritting my teeth in anticipation for the next word.

really, really good.

really.

that was great

This continues to be an amazing story in so many ways!

I can not wait to read more.

Bravo! I really loved the board game analogy. It's difficult to make something as complex as that work, and you did it with great flair.

That was an excellent chapter. I'm looking forward to reading the next installment.

Great update! I love that whole game scenero.

I LOVE how you had Vader find out that Padme left him. Also, I really think it is brilliant how you keep switching from Anakin to Vader. Very smart!

Oh, dear God, you are good! Wow! I absolutely loved this chapter. Everything is falling into place so neatly. Update soon, now!