awe! i am simply in awe!
PLEASE DO UPDATE!
Sherry and Bargo forever!

but i thought you said you had two more chapters planned? why is this discontinued? i've really liked reading these...

Hi twi
this story was good
but I AM NOT SURE OF SOMETHING.

nokimo and brago...did...s(e)x?
poor sherry

The first part was good.But I didn't like this part...( “I can give you happiness,” said a shadowed Nokimo as she held out her hand to the depressed Brago. “You’ll be alright with me.”-

“Mmn… Don’t stop… Keep going…” Nokimo slowly opened her eyes to stare at the darker demon before her when he slowly began to stop grazing the side of her neck and he glanced to the side.

Brago sat up from where he lay and stared at his hands for a while, only realizing what he had been doing for such a long period of time when he felt the moisture in his grasp from his previous actions. Nokimo stared up at him with curiosity as he shook his head.

“This isn’t right,” he murmured and stood up. “I shouldn’t even be here…”

The other stared at him with wide, green eyes as he began to gather his clothing. “Where are you going, Brago?” She sat up with a pleading look in her eyes only when the realization dawned on her. “You’d rather be with her, wouldn’t you?”

“It’s not right,” he murmured. “She was mine… She is mine… Damn it…” He turned to look at Nokimo but said nothing, only angry with himself and her for what he had done, so with that he walked away from her presence, leaving her speechless.)

I HATE NOKIMO !
MAYBE ...
CHAPTER 20: Sherry and Kiyo are talking in the livingroom ,then Brago appears and sees that they are hugging. Brago thinks that Sherry is with Kiyo.

Well , it's only an idea.
BYE

sorry for my bad english, I speak spanish

pd:AGAIN... I HATE NOKIMO !1

*join's Zatch in singing* Brago is a daddy... Brago is a daddy...Brago is a daddy... Brago is a daddy...Brago is a daddy... Brago is a daddy...!

Brago: *eye twitch*

Lol, Fae thats a good name I would imagen Brago and Sherry's kids' names to be a little more mamodo like but Fae is a nice name.

*laughing my ass off* Hahahahaha! Brago had to go to the mall!

Brago: Stupid...son of a...

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Brago: *chases me around*

Help! SHerry control your husband!

Sherry: Maybe later.

Ah! Anyways...wow I'm surprised this couple is basicly the most popular couple here nice story, I can imagen Brago at the mall. Although alot of people would be scared of him.

=3 Ok i've been reading this story for days and since I've been reading it i've been loving this story very much ^^.

I even read the previous versions of the story: Goodbye and Comeback to me (they were great too -has faved them-) but i have to say that this the best part of the story yet!

I hope you update as soon as possible. I am dying -well not really XD- to know what's gonna become of brago since he in under that Noru punk's spell. and Nokino -is that how her name is spelt o.0- she is such a -word is CENSORED- how dare she stills brago from sherry especially when the two of them have a child together.

Poor young Fae. Speaking of Fae, i have a question concerning her. Since Fae is half human/half mamodo (more mamodo than human) would she have powers over gravity like her dad?

It would be so cool to see Fae use her powers (if she has any) to help her mom save her dad.

Anyways i think i've ranted enough. UPDATE SOON PLEASE!

~Mistress

Didn't get the alert for this. >< Ah well. Good chapter! And no prob about the idea. ^^

Well, first off, I hafta thank Sarah303 for getting you back up and running! I think its funny you don't like KxS seeing as Kiyo is actually human; maybe no human is GOOD enough! (lol) K is probably so confused. Last time he saw Sherry..well, she was VERY different, wasn't she? Anyways, Fae is so cute this story just NEEDS to go on! (^_^)

The chapter was very good, yay! I'd write a longer eveiw, but it is already past my bedtime, so, adeiu!

T'aww, sad but sweet. ^^ At least help is on the way! >3

I'm in a hurry and don't really have too much to say, so update when you can! :3 Good chapter! ^^

As far as you've gotten I Like it
Make more of these in time
I Love Brago and Sherry.
They are my fav.^^
Good luck on the rest of the story ^^)

Zatch: "Go Brago, Go Sherry!, YAY!" ^^)
*Zatch does the the groove*

For having such a bad case of writers block, you can still write amazing chapters. If you hadn't told us that, I would've never believed it! I hope Zatch wakes up and smells the faux-sickness! Gosh, he should know better; he's the king, afterall.

Update! Plz you mean cruel person for making such a short chapter.. But love ya anyways.. (aaf)

Good chapter! Ideas? Hmm... Tia could use Saifogeo on Zatch, Brago could have this huge battle with Nokimo and Noru.