 dwennie 2009-11-03 . chapter 19I loved this story. I really liked how you wrote this in journal form, and I think you nailed the characters. I love the way you portrayed Katie :) |
 CYLi 2009-09-04 . chapter 1OMG, this is so good! Love the way you narrated the story through Angelina's voice, how you took effort to convey emotional turmoils and the sorting out of those emotions by Angel. It is a method of building tension and excitement that many romance writers did not do, and thus resulted in fanfics that mainly consisted of snogging...and a lot of something else.
From reading this story and comparing it to other romance fanfics I have read, I realized that love stories cannot be rushed, or the grand finale of the stories will be anti-climatic. And I can tell you, you built up the audience's anticipation quite skilfully. I was so looking forward to Fred and Angel being together, and I was not disppointed. You have no idea how pumped up I was to finish the fanfic. I read till 3 in the morning!
Anyways, excellent story. Heart it. I never thought I would find the Weasley twins hot! :P Until I read your story.
Nice work. Look forward to reading more of your works. |
 CarlisleEsmeRoseScorpius 2009-07-04 . chapter 18Wow.. this was amazing...so finally they got together...i love it! |
 Girl with the Golden Snitch 2009-05-28 . chapter 19WOW! I just read the whole story! It was absolutely AMAZING! You pulled off situations that would normanlly be considered "cheesy" really well. This story is definitely a favorite of mine now! Great Job! Maybe I should go finish my own story... :D |
 DoubleCaramel 2009-05-06 . chapter 1*Fred* lurves *Angie*
Aw ! <’3
Ok, I already reviewed this yesterday, but I probably accidentally deleted my enormous review before submitting it...
Bah x( !
Normal people would let it go but I am psycho xD, so I will write a new one! Muahahaha xD
Anyway I just wanted to say I absolutely loved this FanFic, and I am so going to read the sequel xP!
I love the way you describe the group friendship, specially the one between the girls, I absolutely loved this :)! And I so hated the Giggly-Gang xD.
I think it was ingenious and perfect, and you wrote when I still thought Fred would live a full and happy life (Damn JK.R... Just kidding :) (of course, please don't shoot me) But when I read Fred dying I seriously had to stop reading for some time, I was hyperventilating, why did Fred have to go, why not Percy x) ? Anyway, I sometimes live in "Fred is not dead universe" xD, and I am happy that way ;)
I hope you don't kill Fred in the sequels to this :P!
But if you do, I will still love them, though I will probably get depressed (Kidding x) !
Anyway, sorry for rambling, what I want to say is that this is an Excellent, Creative, Spontaneous and GREAT (in all way's FanFic) ! And I probably will read all of your other ones, because I think you're a great author...
Concluding, so many words on my part for nothing xD, Il just say :
Great Work :)
And this is DEFINITLY the best FredxAngelina Fan Fiction I ever read :)
*K' ^^ |
 DoubleCaramel 2009-05-05 . chapter 19*Fred* hands up for you xP
*K'^^ |
 CammieMorgan 2008-12-29 . chapter 19This is amazing. I'm in love with this story. |
 butterflymuppet 2008-09-15 . chapter 19wowowowowowow
this was amazing- it made me laugh, it made me cry- it was just AMAZING. One of the best F/A fics that I've read so far, and I know you rote this ages ago but I hope you realise how fab it is. I loved it =]! |
 Dawn 2008-06-16 . chapter 19 I know you wrote this story ages ago, but I just recently started reading Harry Potter fan fictions and thought that your's looked entertaining. It has to be the best Fred/Angelina fanfiction I have read thus far. It was sentimental, funny, not graphic, and overall sweet. I never write reviews, but I felt a strong need to with your story. I could actually SEE everything happening! My favorite chapter was chapter 18. I don't know if you remember this story, or even if you still receive reviews for it, but I just thought you should know it's still being now! |
 stunninglyaverage 2008-06-03 . chapter 19I really liked it. I especially liked the way you weaved Ron and Hermione's relashonship into the story. A job well done! |
 DontCopyMe 2008-05-29 . chapter 19Love it! It's so hilarious and fun and AWESOME! The romance is is so sweet! Beautifully written! I haven't read the sequel yet. What will happen? Fred won't ever cheat on Angie will he? That would be the absolute WORST! Well, I guess I'll just have to find out!! |
 Layla Persnickety 2008-05-20 . chapter 18So here I was, reading this fantastic closet scene and then I was hit spot on in the head with the oddest of all misplaced thoughts:
"Gee, funny how they're Coming Out Of the Closet"
It's times like these when I worry about my mental stability.
Anywho, Loved the story! You're a very talented writer! |
 b3lla 2008-05-10 . chapter 19I've just finished this story and I loved it. It was well written (absolutly fabulous compared to most of the *cough* crap *cough* on this website. I liked how you showed Angelina as, not selfish, but just pretty unhappy that all of her friends got such great relationships. I'm off to read the next installment. There's just one thing I'd rather not see: I do like it when people follow the HP books as guidelines but I'd rather not have Fred die in any continuations of this story. :)
-B3lla |
 Passionate with A pencil-FLAME 2007-12-16 . chapter 15i've always loved ur work, Gene, ur drop-dead talented, go head and work it GIRL! |
 Newbie GK 2007-12-15 . chapter 19This is such a great story. I really enjoyed and I have to say that I love the happy ending. It's so cute! |