Amazing.
You have such a beautiful writing style, I seriously loved this.

Simply put, I love it! I'm speechless!

I'm not much for Seth slash but WOAH, this rocked! The wording was beautiful and beautifully and thoroughly described.

Wonderful. Slash fics are just so...intriguing. It was captivating from the first word. And, I loved the last line. I like how you repeated it at the beginning and the end. Great job!