that was gud i loved it i actually have the song off there it goes really well wiv the story xx

OK. I like it, but since I'm young, I would rather her be mad as hell against another guy, some ex-boyfriend, then get Grissom to come in and help her. maybe one of the other guys from the lab, they could just be friendly nice, and her go to sleep happy.

'I never ment for this to get this far'-We both know how much hurt it would cause?
But he couldn't.- What the hell was he thinking?!
Why Gil was always such a man that never speaks his heart out, but let Sara guess? I bear him!
I wantto know how would Gil talk to Terri?

Great ff. Thank you!

I love this story... I printed it out... So I can read it always, when I want... I would like to read a second chapter...

Wow. Again, very nicely written. After Sara sang the song I got in that kinda mood so I had to stop reading and I went to write one myself. If you are interested in hearing it, email me:
Anyway, The only part about this story that kept standing out to me is how Sara kept called him 'Grissom.' If she's in love with him, why would she call him Gil or something like that? Well, that's just something that stuck out to me, but other than that, I have nothing to complain about. Nice song choice by the way, it fit your story perfectly.

Sincerely,
The Blood Of Eden

Aw... and great song choice.

love it omg it was the best

I loved this story! When it got to the song, I downloaded a karaoke version so I could hear everything. Great job!

Hi !!
I think you already posted your fiction here some time ago!
Again : great fiction, a lot of emotions, great choice of song also...great job !
Megara1