Love it. .

i absolutely loved it!

Great story! I really appreciated it. Thanks!

Very, very nice. She is on her way to figuring things out - but she still has a long way to go. Thanks!

He is certainly a good man. I wonder what Gretchen will do now. Great chapter!

Beni the rat strikes again. Their lives are so bleak. Great job as always!

Uh oh. I don't think that's anyone that she wants to meet again. Great chapter!

Ah yes, crazy Winston. He died with a smile on his face. Good job again!

Ardeth truly doesn't understand that kind of greed/motivation. Everyone is certainly forcing Gretchen to re-evaluate her views. Thanks!

I feel sorry for Meela. Very good job again!

I do like Jonathan. Interesting that he came up with that particular wish. Thanks for a great job!

This is interesting! Too bad the mummy didn't eat Daniels first. Thank you very much!

It's interesting that Gretchen is having visions and also that Meela is already around. Thank you for a great chapter!

Great chapter! Wow, poor Jonathan likes her. Thanks again!

Wow, O'Connell certainly held up a mirror for Gretchen to see herself in. Very well done. Ok, I know, I know - this time I am going to bed - probably.