Nice.

Not bad. Maybe good.

Good.

Wahoo?

Good job.

Hehe

*applaud though*

hahaha!! i was laughing the whole time! this is great.. the whole parody thing is just a hit.. and i could easily imagine the scene coz i also watch maria sama ga miteru.. i especially like that osaka was eriko and tomo was rei.. wahaha

I haven't read much of Marimite, but I really like how you've started this. Kaorin is my fav, so I hope she gets a bigger role. T_T

No Nyamo?

Hmm...

I think...
Osaka=Eriko (they're both quirky in their own way...)
Kagura=Rei (sports, kendo, yah...)
Tomo=Yoshino (they both gots the spunk!)
and I guess Yomi could make a good Youko

XD

More, more!

I really liked how you written it styled like the 4koma. Marimite

FYI, the crossover of this type is called "a recast".

Old tagline (with "walking slowly is encouraged") was better. I hope it's not going to change it every chapter?

Darn present tense strikes again. What is it with new authors and present tense? I suppose it's too late to rewrite the story now. Although it's not that long yet. The chapters are rather on the drabble side of sizings...

I do not mind the "southern drawl", but I expect a flock of purists to descend on it...

So far. like it. Its cute^_^ Keep on going!