 Angel of Melius Prime 2009-08-27 . chapter 16Define rediculously long update. HOW LONG IS THAT?!?!?! |
 LightsaberOfJade 2008-08-17 . chapter 16come on! come back to this amazing story! i've spent my sunday night reading half your stories and i can't believe this one has been neglected for so long : ( please?
so good! love carth/revan. as much, if not more, than disciple/exile... ah! good job : ) |
 magooglersriot 2008-07-15 . chapter 16Ohh! Such a good story! I can't wait until the next update. |
 jtothas 2007-10-31 . chapter 1i love love love your take on carth/revan, please update soon! it's a joy to read! |
 quicksilver2402004 2007-09-04 . chapter 16Bloody awesome story!! I just read the whole thing up to chapter 16. When are you going to update?? Please!1 |
 Amanda 2007-06-29 . chapter 16 m this is ahmazing! i want to read moremoremore! haha
i guess i can wait
email me when you've updated it!!
you're an amazing writer by the way! |
 little-green-kitten 2007-01-11 . chapter 16Ohh!! Cliffhanger! Sorry I haven't reviewed but I don't like to until I finish reading as far as I can go! I get too involved in the story. I really like ur story and can't wait for an update. Hayley has to find Carth again, right? Keep up the good work and I can't wait until the next chapter is up! |
 PazaakGirl 2006-07-12 . chapter 16Oh man.. cliffhanger! Couple of errors but overall the writing is good. Update soon!
- Pure Pazaak |
 Mark 2006-05-09 . chapter 16 hi
When are you going to write the next chapter, I'm dying to read it! |
 Mark 2006-04-05 . chapter 16 Love this story!
Please hurry with the next chapter!! |
 Mark 2006-03-14 . chapter 16 Oh, I'm dying for the next chapter, PLEASE keep writing!!
It's very good! |
 Mark 2006-03-12 . chapter 4 Your story is brilliant!!
I love every chapter, I can't wait to read the rest! |
 Gabrielle Lupin 2006-03-07 . chapter 16I just finished reading the rest of your chapter, and all I can say is wow...every chapter is so amazing, I could NOT stop reading, great job, I can't wait for the update, hurry hurry, please, I |
 Narisia 2006-01-18 . chapter 16Very nicely done. I hope to see an update in the near future. Honestly, the best point of this story is the various character battles as well as the perspectives that seem to be going on, it adds flavor to the angst and the undercurrant love theme. In any case, keep it up, kudos, and I'll be watching for another update. |
 Amme Moto 2006-01-09 . chapter 16Ooh, nice cliffie. Now all you have to do is FINISH IT! T_T Lol. Update! |