Define rediculously long update. HOW LONG IS THAT?!?!?!

come on! come back to this amazing story! i've spent my sunday night reading half your stories and i can't believe this one has been neglected for so long : ( please?

so good! love carth/revan. as much, if not more, than disciple/exile... ah! good job : )

Ohh! Such a good story! I can't wait until the next update.

i love love love your take on carth/revan, please update soon! it's a joy to read!

Bloody awesome story!! I just read the whole thing up to chapter 16. When are you going to update?? Please!1

m this is ahmazing! i want to read moremoremore! haha
i guess i can wait
email me when you've updated it!!
you're an amazing writer by the way!

Ohh!! Cliffhanger! Sorry I haven't reviewed but I don't like to until I finish reading as far as I can go! I get too involved in the story. I really like ur story and can't wait for an update. Hayley has to find Carth again, right? Keep up the good work and I can't wait until the next chapter is up!

Oh man.. cliffhanger! Couple of errors but overall the writing is good. Update soon!

- Pure Pazaak

hi
When are you going to write the next chapter, I'm dying to read it!

Love this story!
Please hurry with the next chapter!!

Oh, I'm dying for the next chapter, PLEASE keep writing!!
It's very good!

Your story is brilliant!!
I love every chapter, I can't wait to read the rest!

I just finished reading the rest of your chapter, and all I can say is wow...every chapter is so amazing, I could NOT stop reading, great job, I can't wait for the update, hurry hurry, please, I

Very nicely done. I hope to see an update in the near future. Honestly, the best point of this story is the various character battles as well as the perspectives that seem to be going on, it adds flavor to the angst and the undercurrant love theme. In any case, keep it up, kudos, and I'll be watching for another update.

Ooh, nice cliffie. Now all you have to do is FINISH IT! T_T Lol. Update!