I like the way you wrote Rishid's dialogue. It really sounded like him )

( I hate the name Odion Rishid sounds so much better. )

I find Yu-Gi-Oh an amazing story that so many people seem to watch superficially and judging too fast without seeing the depths of it. Rishid and Malik/Marik are examples of that depth, and it was very interesting to read a Rishid point-of-view fic, I really enjoyed it

Great story! It's really hard to find a story where the character's names are in their original format. Thanks for doing that. And the way you wrote it, so in character for both of them, your wording and everything was fantastic I'd give it a 7/5, thanks for writing it!

-Saph

YES! His name is RISHID! And what a /wonderful/ one-shot. I loved this glimpse into poor Rishid's head. I feel so badly for him. All he ever wanted was to be accepted and loved. Thank you so much for sharing this!

DD5150

Nice. I like Rishid better then Odion meself. _

great story this acctualy sounds the way odion would feel great job

i think you should continue the story it is getting intresting i want to know what will happen next

Nice Job! Aw, poor Malik. And Rishid...

Yay !

Great fanfic ! Write more .

-_-'' You really seemed to capture the characters really well in your stories. Here you seem to describe Rishid's thoughts/feelings pretty damn well. Good writing, no doubt! -

I really liked this! It is beautifully written. His is such an interesting story, and you did an excellent job delving into Rishid's character. Nice work.

this is awesome!

I think you did a great job and I loved it...

and .

Rishid. . .

Okay.

lol

AnimeFreakSlayer

Thank you for writing this! It was very well written - eloquent and concise, with the emotions subtly and effectively communicated. It takes real skill to get real drama across without falling into melodramatic angst, and you got it just right. And Rishid needs more fics about him. He's a true unsung hero, isn't he?