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| susanmary 2005-07-15 ch 1, | abuseNice response, loved how he worked up the courage to ask her out. |
| Woodstock99 2005-07-14 ch 1, | abuseGreat story! Although the preserved head is probably the most disgusting thing I've read in a long time, I really liked the conversation between Sara and Grissom, and him finally asking her out :-) |
| Quill-32 2005-07-14 ch 1, | abuse*laughter* I love a good pun, and that's an absolutely prime one! You took an awkward given line and turned it into a gem. Excellent! The story was great, too. :D Grissom's very in-character, and I'd be happy to read a follow-up if you choose to do one. |
| PhDelicious 2005-07-06 ch 1, | abuseEW! and kinda Awe! too. I'm not sure what I'd do if someone brought a preserved head into my lab. I'd probably wimp out too. Nice little scene. |
| AzureHart 2005-07-05 ch 1, | abuseGreat response to the challenge! |