You do realize that Mokuba calls Seto 'Nii-sama' not 'Onii-sama'? Other than that It's good. Please update

So Cute! Why won't you update it already?

Please?

:puppy dog eyes: Pretty Please?

I love it! please update soon!

UP DATE!

LOl

Yummy, Mokuba/Noa goodness. Keep on writing! I'll be waiting to read the next chapter!

Cute. But short. If you write more, this could be a great fic, but in it's current state there isn't enough length for story...

GREAT START, UPDATE OR DIE... DIE I SAY... um... I had sugar... need I say more?

PLZ UPDAT SOON!This is gonna be good you bet!MokubaxNoa 4-eva!JouxSeto 4-EVA!_ Plz update

Great story with a very original plot!

Now, in a review you sent me you said you needed a little help as you had writers block- i don't know if that includes this story, but here's a idea which you can use or reject doesn't matter to me:-

Basically Seto can tag along, and as he reluctantly allows Mokie and Noa to go to a spa, he chooses to go to the beach or something where he bumps into Jou- he talks to Jou about why he's here, and then about why Jou's here and Seto realises Jou's actually had it quite hard lately because (this is just a little suggestion,) he's been working so hard to support him and his ill (or drunk, whatever,) father (as they are very poor.)Then Jou realises Seto has it quite hard as all he does is work and etc, then they notice they have things in common.

I don't know, it might be a load of rubbish what i just wrote, but anyway, good luck with the story- i'm lovin' it so far!

Miguels-Lover

I think this will be brillant :) Oh I love the idea already, can't wait for your next update!

This is so...

* 10 minutes later *

...o cute! Please update soon! * Imitates puppy-dog eyes *

aw kute! update soon! _

'Seto eye started to twitch. 'Must resist cuteness...can't fall for it...must not let him go on the trip...must fight it..." When will he realize he's fighting a losing battle and give up?'

NEVER! If my analys of Seto-chan is right, then he will never ever learn not to fight the puppy-dog eyes.

Lucky Jou. I wanna go to a resort and get set up by my brother with a hottie. (Like 'Kura-chan! _) Oh wait, my brothers hate me.

Catlover: MWUHAHHAH no one can resist the puppy dog eyes, watch...

DCatlover: (comes in)

Catlover: (puppy dog eyes) Yami can I please have another lolly...

DCatlover: No.

Catlover: Damn.

DCatlover: (Smirks evily)

Catlover: (slaps Rose-sama & DC upside the head) Yami's are just so mean... Always telling you your fic sucked, even when it didn't