hurry up and write the next chapter!

OmiwordthisissocoolIcan'tstoptoreviewmustreadmore.

*selfishly stops review to go read the rest of the fic in a frenzy of fangirlish excitement*

Ahh! Cliffie! Yay!

nice story!!keep up the good work

"Then Aang and Sokka’s mouths begin quivering and Iroh’s eyes fill with tears as the three of them scan the waters for signs of Katara and Zuko."

This nearly made me cry myself! Another excellent chapter-er story...er...whatever!

Very nicely done, me like. Just one thing, doesn't Zuko have only one eybrow?

ok, i'm a little ignorant as to what's going on. I've only seen up to chapter 13. have you done 14 and 15 yourself or are they actually episodes that have aired? but besides that, this is pretty good. please continue.

I really like your stories! Please write more! If you've got time, could you look at mine? (Once I put it up, I can't yet, new account) Excellent Stories! Can't wait for the next one!

Oh, this makes me happy. I'm so glad to see lots of initial hostility between Zuko and Katara. I also like how you portrayed Aang, trying to "play with fire". You nailed him right on the head. Although, I'm not *quite* sure Aang can learn the elements out of order...but that's dismissable.

"For a moment, Zuko remembers the admiring twilit glow he had seen in those eyes just yesterday and wishes she would look at him like that again."

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