Hey, just have to comment on the chappies. Chapter 14 was cool. The whole having Sokka make Aang wait before swiping Katara off the beach was cool. Chapter 15 rocked. Not much to say, other than Zuko so rocks my socks!! Chapter 16 is cool I got cut off by someting we all need. Sleep. I love how it's turning out so far. Chapter 17 is sickly sweet (thats good). Yay for resurrecting the UNAGI!! I'll keep reading as soon as the sun rises tomorrow. All day to myself. Woopee!

Raaon Teisha (:)

Whoa, sokka, what's with the boomerang! Coolio - keep it up.

but the people-talking-in-the-same-paragraph-as-other-people is bothering me. I find it difficult to follow.

But good job! Congrats!

please keep up the good stoies

Aww, poor snow panthers lol. Hey, doesn't the Southern Water Tribe have a pet snow panther? Or is that a bear? o_O;

Anyway, great work as usual!

erm...where's the Sea Serpent chapter? oO;

Another great chapter--as usual. The Unagi fight scene was well thought out, and I like how you managed to use a threatening animal we've encountered before and not regurgitate exactly what Aang did in WOK.

"Oh, shirt!" I liked that pun. XD

One minor nitpick...I'm pretty sure Tyro said, "Don't worry, I hear cowards float". Eh, not that Zuko's cowardly, but I'd bet he'd float anyways...due to all that hot air he has! ^.^

I liked it, but Haru's father said: "Don't worry, I hear cowards float."

This is incredible writing and a highly original plot. Be proud! :)

However, you can't have all the episodes as different stories; they belong together in one fiction, as chapters. Since you aren't using the chaptering feature, all of them can deleted and you could be on probation for updating and creating stories for a week. Word to the wise, just use the chaptering feature.

Great job, update soon.

are these stories at all connected? your chapters? by the way...all of them are really good

Good job. It's nice to have these little written episodes to read while waiting for the show to resume. I eagerly await #18.