It's been almost two years since you stopped working on this story. It makes me so sad cause I really love this story. It's one of my favorites that you have done. This is purely beautiful work and I really wish you had continued it. *sigh* Oh well.

-N. Shadow

This is a fantastic story. Incredibly creative and beautifully written. Are you ever planning to finish it? It says you haven't updated since last year. Please finish it :). That would be great.

*pouts* aww, why isn't this done yet? it's addicting, just like all of your other works...

oh, i hope you come back to this someday...i want to find out what happens to them. *sigh*

warm regards,
dark-hearted rose

There are no words to describe the utter poeticism of this piece.
It's like a POTO hybrid of What Dreams May Come and The Five People You Meet In Heaven.
So utterly surreal and beautiful.
At Christine's part, I nearly wept. I love the utter overwhelming joy and forgiveness that just shines like a loving sun all throughout this gorgeous tale.

You, my dear, are BRILLIANT.

This style of this story reminds me very much of one of my favorite books and movies... The Five People You Meet in Heaven. I love it! :)

Gosh, I'm only the 8th reviewer for this masterpiece? How very sad. Try not to let the lack of reviews get you hung over, and if it's not, then, disregard that comment :) . Please write more soon!

Your writing style is brilliantly simple and real, you have a gift with words. I love this story. It is my favorite Phantom story.

Amazing! Amazing! The feeling you create make me want to laugh and cry all at once. This story is like a gift. I'll make sure to tell all of my friends to read it. Amazing!

WAH! ITS SO SO SO GOOD
*tears* aw God bless you for writing this!

If there is an afterlife...I hope its like that ^_^. I think this is my favorite story...Especially how he rid himself of all the things that he didn't really want much...This was amazing, Please, Keep Writing!!

This was amazingly descriptive and spiritual. It reminded me a bit of What Dreams May Come, but better. It is a wonderful view on what may happen after we pass on and I loved it. Thank you for writing it and posting it for us to see.

PS: You have your preferences set so only members can review. You would get more reviews if you set it so everyone can review.

Wow...I like this story! It kinda reminds me of the book called "the 5 people you meet in heaven"lol. Is this the ending to the story though? if not, update soon! lol

Your Obedient Reader,

Stephanie

May I be the first to say, Brava. This story was better then any other I have read. The way you describe the setting was written very very well. I could picture an image in my head, and that is what writing is all about.
You are a true author.