good, but seine is pronounced sen, so it doesnt ryme with pain, but still, a good poem.

Well-done and original.

Wow... Very good. I loveies it. you have a real nice talent with writting!

It would be rather hard for Victor to sue you, as he's awfully dead at present.

I love this. You really know how to get inside this guy's head. I give you a bread salute. Wait..that didn't make sense. I mean...I give a salute of bread...ah, heck, I salute you!

***** stars.

...YIY YIY YIY...((falls over))GEEZ! You write too good! 'Ponine 67, you sure are gonna go places. I LOVE IT! ((cries))It-was so beautiful!1111 "Black or white, it is he that I shall spite,

He cannot be freed without a fight.

I would rather be somewhere dying as a convict's son

Than say that I forfeit and he has won." Wowwww! "This mortal has never swayed throughout his time,

But too late, I've committed a crime,

Solace of night, you have been sent,

But too late, I've stolen the bread of the government!" This thing's got great morals. It's really good! **************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************** STARS! !