 Lovegranted 8/9/11 . chapter 4oh my! though I don't really like Jirou with Atobe... it can't be helped! oh well... hahaha... wait, are you not continuing this? but... i like it... a lot! hmmmph... anyway... please shoot me a message if this fic is discontinued! (i really hope it isn't!) |
 Lovegranted 8/9/11 . chapter 3Atobe-kun! you're sooooo COOL! AHHH! naturally, you can't get rid of naturally born instincts... [nods head at Fuji, who is trying to kill Inui... errr yea] anyway, that was great! I'm moving on! |
 Lovegranted 8/9/11 . chapter 2hmmmm, this chapter seems WAY different than the last one... this chapter was more comical while the last more serious... or is it only my imagination? anyway... I LOVE Ryoma! Eiji! stop being mean... Oishi was my favorite though... since he totally destroyed the teacher... hahaha on to the next chapter! :) |
 Fadey 6/19/10 . chapter 4O.O kinda weird, but very funny too:) update please! |
 AniManGa19930 4/15/09 . chapter 4Update please |
 Darkkaiser379 4/14/09 . chapter 4This story is brilliant so far! One of the best PoT fics (and fanfics in general) that I've read!
You haven't updated in years though have you abandoned this? |
 Tacuma 1/8/08 . chapter 4Why didn't you update for more than a year? It's such a good fic! I really love it and I would love to know how it will end! |
 takari love 11/14/07 . chapter 4Oh my god! This fic is so interesting...lol
I really can't wait for the next chapter...
Pls update soon..., |
 Animestar73 6/21/07 . chapter 2OMG THIS IS SO FRICK HILARIOUS I WAS LITERALLY CRYING WITH LAUGHTER!
This is so good! So increadibly good! *hails at your powress* Innocent Syuu-chan is a molestable tensai! *faints from noesbleed* |
 kaesaku 3/7/07 . chapter 4hehe..
funny!
do continue
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 kawaiisuzu 1/10/07 . chapter 4LOVING YOU TO DEATH RIGHT NOW!
Yay! You updated!
adjioaisgai hgop aighsgio... I'm just a bit speechless, but I've been waiting for this for a while now...so I guess the words all died.
What can I say?
Write more? (_);; |
 Reviewer 12/31/06 . chapter 1 "I am disturbed by thoughts of 12-14 yrs old doing things, so this story takes place in HS. This follows no particular timeline from the manga, so don't get confused. And as you read on, you might notice that this fic can be a little bitsy random..."
I am disturbed of this happening at any age. Men don't get pregnant! Mpreg is the most ridiculous thing I have ever heard. Just make your own character because this is so obviously a disguised Mary Sue.
A little bitsy random? Is that just an excuse for poor writing? Why don't you save the excuses and work on your craft instead? It will serve you better in the long run. |
 KagomeGirl021 12/29/06 . chapter 4haha confusing but funny _ |
 unknownperson999999 12/29/06 . chapter 4okay, that cleared up the yukimura and sanada business sorta...at least they aren't dead! but i still dont know where they are or what that has to do with the whole fuji thing. OH WELL i STILL LIKE! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! it's definetly on favs, and once it's finished, most likely on my Csquared. :D |
 unknownperson999999 12/29/06 . chapter 3WHOAWHOAWHOAWHOAWHOA! what happened to yukimura and sanada! Don't tell me that D means Death! what does that have to do with the story thou?
and what the heck does atobe have to do with the story!
why did you stop there!
OMFG! I LOVE THIS. |