Loving the story!
Funny and Crazy!

i didnt think that it was too great, it was like a 5th grader wrote it. Such as when double d was like, "I'm embarrassed," he said trying to be a manikin'" I would have said something like (dd)"im so embarrased" (eddy) "just shut up and go back to being the manikin" .Make it so it isn't too obvious that he is embarraassed for that reason. If some one reads that and they dnt get it at first why he is embarrassed then later when they then think of it they will find it more funny.

Cool story, it was really good! You got the Ed's personalities spot on, well done!

A rather amusing story. You should keep worrying about character personalities, you got them spot on! A great story.

Dude, this chapter was so kule. I really liked the part where the Eds trapped the Kankers in Ed's basement. That was so kule. Thanks so much for dedicating this chapter to me. I really appreciate it. This story is almost as kule as Big Ed is stupid. So in other words, this story is great. Adios dude.

Hola dude. This story is so grood. I mean good... and great. Great and good. This chapter receives a 10 out ot 10 on my booyah meter. Plz write more. I can't wait to see what happens.

This story is great. I give it a 9.9 on my booyah meter. I can't wait to read chapter 2.

preaty good but here #"Chill dude, there's enough for everyone to have seven," Rolf looked disappointed, but sat back down again. She walked over to the small picnic table that was set up outside and put the large pack of marshmallows on it.# rolf says dude wich is kevins thing so i give you a,

dill pickle(4/5)
tell me when more comes
the pickle

looks good. i'll read more. ...kay...=P