Oh my goodness.

I know it's probably pretty pointless reviewing when I'm sure you've abandoned this story, but I stumbled across it and let me just say wow. You've captured the characters pretty much perfectly, and the storyline is totally fascinating. I love that you put Spike and Faith together- I feel like they'd be perfect together. I'm especially impressed with all the suspense and everything; it's just like an extended episode of the show. I really really really hope you write some more of it, because I'd love to see more... also I want to see Buffy and Angel back together ;]

But all in all, great job!

It sounds like Faith is going to be added to Adam. That would be an interesting twist. I still can't wait until Angel and Buffy realize the other's alive. Please update soon.

update pwease.

great chapter! update soon!

I can't remember when my last review of this story was, but it was quite a while ago, lol. I found the chapter update alert in my email, and I started reading yesterday and I just wanted to tell you to keep up the good work.

I thought you might want to be aware that there are a few spelling errors, a few typing errors (he instead of she and whatnot) but otherwise a decent story.

Though it's killing me that you're taking this long to get them back together! You were so close, and then god damned Riley had to interfere...are you going to kill him in the end? Or completely humiliate him, that would be even better...

But so here's my review, please update this soon, because it is a great story, and the first fanfic I've read and enjoyed in probably close to a year now.

post more!

Hey, Ill let ya know what I think of the score when I recive im having it shiped over from America. It sucks living in a country that doesnt get things quick. New Zealand takes ages to get things, like the character dvd sets and best of buffy they havnt arrived in NZ yet grr.

Anyway on with story I thought it was awesome and a very good read I cant wait to see what happens next, keep up the great work :)
BA forever

Can buffy and Angel get together again already? Please! It's killing me here! Even though I'm a big Angel/Cordy fan (saw Angel before Buffy...always thought Buffy was bad news for Angel before I saw the first season of buffy...) I love this story, I'm also a big Cordy/Doyle fan and I hope they end up together and nothing stupid happens to him, like oh say, dying...

Can't wait for more, and reactions to Angel/Buffy not being dead...Hey what happened to Xander anyways? He just kinda dissapeared after the encounter with those chicks at the Bronze. Oh well.

gibby

congrats! Keep going!

Now we're getting somewhere! Can't wait for more. Just found it and I love it!
Love Abs x0x

cool

It was nice to see the update notice. I'm wondering if Angel and Buffy will see each and work together to get Faith back and bring the Initiative down?

This is great ... please torture Riley just a little!!

I thought of at least 20 separate and conflicting responses to this chapter, and each one sounded more ridiculous than the next even in my head. So let me just say that I love the way you've incorporated all the aspects of BS4 and AS1 while still keeping a fresh approach to the initiative plotline. And as for the B/A situation... as a fellow writer I say kudos on building such maddening suspense, but as a reader and crazed B/A shipper I say come ON. They're like two halves of a magnet. They can't be in the same city this long and not end up slapped together unless they were deliberately avoiding it. I want them together and I want smoochies! And yes, I did say all of that in the whiny voice of a 4 year old. UPDATE SOON!

Uh-oh. Just when everything might finally go for the better. Poor Faith, never suspecting exactly how ruthless the Initiative really is. I hope Spike and Buffy find her before its too late. And, of course, that Buffy finds Angel before it's too late. And that Willow gets up the courage to talk to Oz.

You've managed to capture everyone's voices, which isn't easy.