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| PalisDelon 2008-06-28 ch 1,  | abuseFor not writing this character/ universe before, that was amazing. I felt very drawn in. |
| beccaj-ilh 2007-04-14 ch 1, | abusei really liked this, mainly because not many people seem to choose to write from Achilles point of view. It was a very good one-shot |
| xX-girl with broken wings-X... 2006-07-12 ch 1, | abuseoo. i liked it. it was cute. good descriptions. i always loved the achilles/briseis thing. fun. cya |
| Calliope Foster 2005-08-24 ch 1, | abuseAwe...this was so sad! I loved it though, it was so incredibly meaningful, too. I loved A/B. They made the cutest darn couple--it's always a joy to read your stories! |
| Preppygirl 2005-07-25 ch 1, | abuseWTF? Spider? Is that you? WHAT HAVE YOU DONE WITH SPIDER? Writing a A/B fic? I'm ashamed to know you. UGH! |
| ScjT] 2005-07-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseLoved it.. |
| Queen Isolde 2005-07-14 ch 1, | abuseThis is a beautiful plotless piece that shows Achilles emotions well. I normally hate having to read long paragraphs because of my ADD but I got caught up in this. Very good job. I'm an HA shipper too, but AB is also a favorite. Cassie |
| Lady reader 2005-07-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseI must confess to being rather reluctant to read this at first, but I’m now so glad I did. It really is lovely and I wouldn’t be sorry to read more (hint, hint) ;~) |
| Modern Goddess 2005-07-09 ch 1, anon. | abusePLEASE don't go back, that was so good. It was very well written and epressed emotion in a realistic way. Very nice job!! |
| Lady Hades 2005-07-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt was only a matter of time before I read this, it was rather quite good, ha, that's an understatement, I actually enjoyed it, t'was very deep. I'm not sure what to say about an A/B fic, I just thought it was brilliant, good work. Now march yourself right back to A/H land. ~Rachael~ |
| Andrea 2005-07-08 ch 1, anon. | abusehi...that was really great. you used great language and detail. i think you should keep going as it is interesting. keep up the good work. |
| inquisitive me 2005-07-07 ch 1, | abuseThat was a great job! I reckon you captured Achilles feelings spot on! Write more A/B! |
| Tiffany 2005-07-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseFor someone who doesn't write A/B fanfiction this story is very amazing. I personally am a HUGE fan of Achilles/Briseis stories and yours was really great. You are an excellent writer. If you wirte H/A stories I might have to start reading them. Lol..anyways Keep up the great work. |
| Priestess of the Myrmidon 2005-07-07 ch 1, | abuseI think it's B. E. A. U. T. I. F. U. L.! Wow. I love it. Glad to see you ventured out. Yes. *is ashamed of self* I AM a huge A/B fan, no matter how unrealistic and all that crap, it is, (like it isn't obvious.) Honestly, I think you portrayed him perfectly. Got right into his head. Very good work. I LOVE it. Going on my faves, just an FYI... ~Priestess |
| Gaby 2005-07-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseit was really good !I liked it!! \I think you expressed Achilles feelings really good!! |