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| painfuladdiction 2005-08-12 ch 1, anon. | abusei guess all i have to say is that is very interesting, I assume you won't have any sort of sequel, but your diction is clever. two thumbs up! |
| penny.philosophous 2005-07-16 ch 1, | abuseI don't know what to say. |
| Eines Zwei Drei 2005-07-07 ch 1, | abuseHey after you reviewed my fic I thought I would come and check out yours. I really enjoyed this. I think it really captures an essence of Ryan that is rarely portrayed in fic. A Ryan that is dark, slightly philosphical and willing to call life Grey. Keep writing I look forward to reading more. As for your spelling of Colour, I back you up completely. I'm Canadian, where alot of words come with an extra U. |
| Yes. I am evil-oh well 2005-07-07 ch 1, | abuseI don't really get this. Doesn't seem like Ryan would think like this. Him and Marissa could work it out. Whatever. Good job, I suppose. "It's grey"...okay. SarCasTic |
| just-nikki 2005-07-07 ch 1, | abuseThis is great, and I heart it. DCfC song is techinically "A Lack of Color," without the "u," but whatever. There's already two other fics with the same title (including one my friend and I are writing under blackhawkbabes08), so I guess the change makes sense. Well, great story, keep up the good work, and all that jazz. Toodles, Nikki |
| I-Believe-In-The-Butterflie... 2005-07-06 ch 1, | abuseThis was good. But if you're going to use one of Death Cab's songs...you should spell the name all correctly. 'Colour' as you put it, is spelled Color. A Lack Of Color. Don't believe me? I have 2 CD's with that song on it. OC mix 2 and Transatlaticism. Good oneshot though. -J |