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painfuladdiction
2005-08-12
ch 1, anon.
abusei guess all i have to say is that is very interesting, I assume you won't have any sort of sequel, but your diction is clever. two thumbs up!
penny.philosophous
2005-07-16
ch 1,
abuseI don't know what to say.
Eines Zwei Drei
2005-07-07
ch 1,
abuseHey after you reviewed my fic I thought I would come and check out yours. I really enjoyed this.
I think it really captures an essence of Ryan that is rarely portrayed in fic. A Ryan that is dark, slightly philosphical and willing to call life Grey.

Keep writing I look forward to reading more.
As for your spelling of Colour, I back you up completely. I'm Canadian, where alot of words come with an extra U.
Yes. I am evil-oh well
2005-07-07
ch 1,
abuseI don't really get this. Doesn't seem like Ryan would think like this.

Him and Marissa could work it out.

Whatever. Good job, I suppose.

"It's grey"...okay.

SarCasTic
just-nikki
2005-07-07
ch 1,
abuseThis is great, and I heart it.

DCfC song is techinically "A Lack of Color," without the "u," but whatever. There's already two other fics with the same title (including one my friend and I are writing under blackhawkbabes08), so I guess the change makes sense.

Well, great story, keep up the good work, and all that jazz.

Toodles,
Nikki
I-Believe-In-The-Butterflie...
2005-07-06
ch 1,
abuseThis was good.

But if you're going to use one of Death Cab's songs...you should spell the name all correctly. 'Colour' as you put it, is spelled Color. A Lack Of Color. Don't believe me? I have 2 CD's with that song on it. OC mix 2 and Transatlaticism.

Good oneshot though.

-J
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