Hey, Shrub! It's me, zeldafan10101. And, whaddaya know? I go by Zeph! XD You gave me the perfect nickname, so Zeph the Mage is my username on here.

I love what you are doing with the story. It has improved so much! The storyline and the discriptive writing is amazing; it just feels like its happening right in front of me. Keep up the great work!

=3

oh yeah, and why is it rated M? Is their going to be any you know, 'scenes' or something?

heh, funny running into you here too! I actually have stories on this site, but their mostly naruto fan-fics. You should check em out if you have time, or if you like naruto. Anyway update soon!

Wait a minute! I have read this story before! Do you know how long I've been waiting for ch18? Forever! Your killing me man!

Anyways, nice and long chapter. Can't wait for the next update!

*stratches head* I'm having a brain fart. I can't remember if I've read your story or not. I think I have, but not sure.
I this that story that had a dark elf in it? I can't remember. >.<

But anyways, great chapter!

I read your first version of this story( I can't remember if I reviewed or not), and it always stood out in my mind. It was one that I often came back to re read and I never stopped hoping that you would update. I was a little shocked to see that you were re writing it (I thought it was fantastic the way it was), but I'm very pleased at the results. This makes me so happy! I've already read these two chapters twice. Don't stop writing, I love it.
Thanks so much for continuing this. I can't wait until the next chapter.

I was hoping for Chapter 19, but I can wait a while (and it looks like it will take a while, since you seem to have lenghtened your story to make it better). You certainly have done a good job improving the story, though there were a couple parts where I feel like I only really understood it because I had enough knowledge about your characters to understand what you were saying, but at the same time, I think it explains things much better than before, such as why they never decided seven years was too long for an answer from Gerudo Fortress.

Wow. And four years later, s/he updates! ^^ I didn't even remember this fic! Whew
I do hope this wasn't a oneoff! Otherwise, you're a total tease~! ^^

my friend leah told me you changed a lot but damn XD
it looks really good so far to, but i dont think you have any idea how much i want to read chappie 18...
well i likethe new name for the dark elves and that you introduced nottuu as a dragon so early and rontu

DAMN!
I KNEW that would happen!
Write more.

"There's a difference between normal bombs, which were also made by Gorons, and the power kegs. If you've played Majora's Mask, you'd know that the power kegs are bigger barrels, bigger bombs with a bigger blast. The normal bombs are, well, normal. The small black ones."

And there's yet another difference between "powder" kegs, which /did/ come from Majora's Mask, and "power" kegs, which is missing a 'd'. ^.^;

Amazing story. but you said in the summary that Link was losing his mind more and mor ;it seems less and less. There should be a big injury scene where link finally loses it goes green-eyed wacko...but really it's all up to you, opinion only.

I found this story around the exact same time last year and I feel in LOVE with it! It was probably one of the first fanfics that I would come home and read annually. Every night before bed I'd come home and read a chapter.

I was so sad when I reached this chapter but I still check up every once in a while, I recently noticed that you were working on revising the chapters so that was a pleasant surprise for me, haha.

You actually inspired to write my own fanfic, they suck but it's okay as long as I have fun right? But anyway I know you're not obliged to do anything for me but I would really appreciate it if you would send me an update of what you are doing just to let me know kind of what's up.

Thanks for your time.

-Allie-

amazing story, great characters, incredible ideas, Ocarina of Time was the best game ever made, and you are most certainly doing it justice.

Very good story, Shrub. Hope to see chapter 19 soon... though seeing as you are rewriting everything, it probably won't be posted anytime soon, so...