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| Ethereal-Journey 2005-07-11 ch 2,  | abuseOh my, what an outburst, wouldn't expect anything less from Ellie. Yeah, this was scary. Oh, I can so imagine the look on Brass's face. Great chapter! Please continue! |
| beaujolais 2005-07-07 ch 2, | abuseWow, Ellie is one messed up chick! Scary. I always wondered what could have transpired between Brass and Ellie before the episode, "Ellie". Looks like this might answer the question. |
| SallyKD 2005-07-07 ch 1, | abuseGreat beginning to the story. I often think Brass is overlooked when he is such a great characted. I can't wait to read more soon!! |
| Ethereal-Journey 2005-07-07 ch 1, | abuseWow. You should most definitely continue this. I'm a huge Brass fan myself, and I would love to read what happens next. |
| Lady Maria 2005-07-07 ch 1, | abuseI like it. I have always felt like playing with Ellie's character. Something had to have shaped her into the angry young woman she is; unfortunately, I no longer have time to write. So I look forward to reading more of this story. I like how you draw similarities between Ellie and Jim. However, it would have been best to mark it as an AU in the summary. Obviously, Ellie never showed up in Vegas before...What was it, third season? By that time, she was pretty much a full grown woman. Another question: What season or time frame does this take place in? That said, I eagerly await the next chapter. |
| beaujolais 2005-07-07 ch 1, | abuseThis is better than good enough--this is excellent! I love Brass so I'm excited to see a story centered around him. And bringing Ellie into it just makes the story so much more interesting. Please continue! |