Reviews for If At First You Don't Succeed

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daydream53 2008-07-24 ch 16,	abuseYOU HAVE TO UPDATE LIKE NOW if you update i will read it
CZG 2008-06-11 ch 16, anon.	abuseWHY! THIS IS SO GOD! PLEASE HURRY AND UPDATE! PLEAASE!
songbird101 2008-04-28 ch 16,	abusethis is one of my favourite fanfics! I'm supposed to be writing two essays for tomorrow but I'm addicted! Please finish it...please please please! Leaving it with only on chapter to go is cruel and unusual punishment!
Julie Long 2008-04-27 ch 16,	abuseYou haven't updated in a year and some, but man is this a good story. You've left me at the edge of my seat, and I may never know how this story will conclude.
someone 2008-02-04 ch 16, anon.	abuse... you've given up on this story haven't you? )= sniff
Peace Like a River 2008-02-01 ch 16,	abuseOh wow! This story is incredible. It grabbed my attention right away and kept up reading well into the night. I think you have the pacing of the story down just right, and I really love the drama and intensity of it all. And there are so many characters thrown in there, yum. :-) I like how you resolved the issue of Robin's identity; there aren't enough good Titans fics where both Dick and Tim figure into the story. I really wish you would write the last chapter, though. (I know you're still on the site, the last time you updated one of your stories was on Jan. 26 :-) Yep, I'm officially stalking you now, lol. :-P (But as a brilliant writer, you should be used to that by now, I guess.)
Someone 2008-01-20 ch 16, anon.	abuseReview number 100! Open a bottle of campange and congratulate yourself! and maybe, just maybe, consider continuing on this story? Just maybe... Please! ...I'll give you a review for every new chapter? And a cookie?
far away 2007-11-29 ch 16, anon.	abuseWhy won't you update ); This story is to good to stay unfinished, can't you see that?
Someone far far away 2007-09-23 ch 16, anon.	abuseThis story is just...wow. WOW. I lost intress in the teen titans series some time ago, but this story got me into it again. That should make you feel proud, probably more people than me are and is getting inspiered by your story, so you better countinue okay? :) Can't wait to see what's gonna happend!
ambria 2007-08-05 ch 16, anon.	abuseI just finished reading great fanfic, please cotinue.
Asilla 2007-06-17 ch 16,	abuseGood chapter. And sorry it took me so long to review. So what'll happen to Nightwing? You said last chapter that he wont ever talk to Roy again. Is that true?... hm. so good chapter the only thing that bugged me was the ending with the present tense. Can't wait for more!
Rena Redhead 2007-05-03 ch 16,	abuseAh! You updated! And with such an awesome chapter! Man! That was such an excellent read! You have no idea how happy I was when I saw that you updated. I loved how you had Arsenal and Batman sort of figuring out Slade's plan, but they haven't quiet gotten there yet. And then Slade. He can be so cruel! I loved how you wrote when Nightwing saw Tim and his surprise at his attitude towards him. One of my favorite lines that you had in there was when Slade was demeaning Tim. Only Slade would have the nerve. Only him. I also really enjoyed how Nightwing was so shocked to see Tim fighting him and being almost pained to fight him at the same time. Then that line! "Liar, he's a liar." Poor Tim! The drugs in his system most be so potent at the moment, I can only imagine his anger and hurt. I so hope you update soon! This is such a cool story! Great Job! Later! ~Rena
Alexnandru Van Gordon 2007-04-29 ch 16,	abuse...blinks O_O...blinks again O_O...I remember this story. Wow--still as awesome as ever! I can hardly wait for another chapter (although I won't push because then I'd be a hypocrite) XD -Standing ovation -Alexnandru Van Gordon
Tressa 2007-04-21 ch 16,	abuseGoodness! Way to give a person a heartattack. Its slowly starting to make sense now. Your characterization is still spot on and I'm loving this fight scene here at the end. I find it interesting that Slade doesn't seem to care which one he'll end up with- Tim or Dick, so long as he has his apprentice. Great description and action sequence. I loved the thought process that Dick has when Tim first begins to attack. Very well done. I'm anxiously waiting for more!
Rena Redhead 2007-03-15 ch 15,	abuseOh! Wow! I've just finished reading all 15 of the chapters up now, and I have to say, I'm fully hooked on this story! You're such an awesome author it's not even funny. I love this idea that Slade would come back after all that time and attempt to go after Tim. It's just too cool a story to not tell! I love how you've written Nightwing. He's the protective older brother, good friend, and ultimate leader. I liked how you wrote the story itself too. Maybe it's because I read the old comics and the new ones, but I found that if Robin (Nightwing) had been Slade's apprentice in the comics, this could totally be an arc that they could publish at DC. You did a great job with Tim as well. The poor kid, I mean, if something was being kept from you by your best friends and you have a guy like Slade after you, how much worse can it get? And now that I'm done with these chapters, I'm so looking forward to your next update! I know that you haven't updated in a while, but I'm going to hope for it anyway! Great Job! Later! ~Rena

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