LOL!! Weirdness...very weird...but I suppose deep down I've always wondered about those two. Heh heh heh...

The only thing I'd have done differently with this story is Lister's accent. Writing in a scouse accent would have been way cool.

That's sweet. I liked it ^^ I saw it on my emails from the RDSS so I came here to comment since it's easier for me.
Keep writing. I liked it. ^^ (such a sweet story)

Aw. Lovely. Simply lovely! Bravo! :D

*sniggers* i know this is like a big feeling story thing, but I still think it was gd in a funny way, you get the perfect balance between seriousness dead pan, and comedy,and i actually thought smoke me a kipper was quite slashy when lister and Rimmer squared stuff up on the railings, and lister did that tribute to the "Dead" rimmer

aw! perfectly lovely x.x

i can't be bothered to log in.
cool!you got that song in it! i s'pose that scene on the observation deck could've been slashy.
hope no one on here or anyone you know got hurt up in London.