it was really good i enjoyed it a lot.

Tragic, too bad she passed. Too bad for both. Maybe loves does last forever.

ok that was really sad and a really horrible death for Kim. was Kim actually real or was it just a figment of Ron's imagination? and did Ron just pass on to heavy to be with Kim just like that? not knowing is really nagging at me right now man.

Sort of a bittersweet thing going on there I don't enjoy the whole death fic thing too much either but every once in a while you get one that even though it's sad still makes you feel a little good.

really nice deathfic...it is pretty sad and the last part was pretty emo for me...i could have sworn i had tears or something...wat i felt was tat love isnt abt living with somebody...its abt somebody u cant live without...so tats why ron passed on in the end... *sniff*
nice work tho!

A very good story, kind of confusing in the end, how did he die?

Sad too...very sad...

First off, I don't like Deathfics. I find most of them a bit too macabre for my tastes, and that is regarding the ones that arent just exercises in heaping misfortune upon the characters.

However, your story was excellent.

The way Ron held on to the Memory of Kim, despite everything. The fact that it was possibly a hallucination, or maybe it was a sort of divine gift.

I actually teared up at the end. A good writer can get a reader involved in a story. A great writer actually provokes an emotional response from the reader. And you have done just that.

Thank you.

Oh, it was so sweet, I almost cried... And I never cry. Never, not even at sad movies. So that's really saying alot for your writing abilities.

Very sad. It is easy to see how he could never be without her. Who among us does not feel the Ron to someone else's Kim?

Deathfics do indeed have a way of writing themselves. Too many are maudlin. This one was not. I look forward to reading the rest of your work.

I think that the reviewer saying that the story was sad in a pathetic way, is being needlessly harsh, though I do see his point. I believe this story is very well written, and it was very sad, in an emotional way, but I don't think that this does Ron justice.

It sort of paints him as someone who couldn't move on, and I don't believe that's how his character is. This is just my opinion though. All in all, this was a very good story, keep it up.

Wow... That was really, kinda... Beautiful. *sniff* Bravo!

That was so very sad but not emotionally, no it was sad pathetically. That Ron Stoppable is nothing but a shell filled with such immense love for Kim Possible that without her his life is pointless is whats "sad". I know that Kim would have. In her heart Ron would always be. But eventually her pain would subside and she would learn to love again. Yet your Ron could not. I pity Ron. He had so much more to give.

I like that story but I'm confused, how did Ron die?

This was a good story great job! I love it and I cried.

Beast57
Fear the Beast

very cute story i loved it! one question though is ron dead? because it sort of does not say that he was dead lol