Adorable, loved it! Well written and beautifully done.

i was very impressed with this story. this was my first Firefly fanfic. There are alot of he/her/him/she errors in this story so it was a bit choppy. but i liked the plot idea. very realistic ... well the begining anyway

Wow! A great find. A deeply flawed Jayne, finding redemption in the end. Wonderful angst (if angst can be so) - those shippers over at the SG section who write J/S malarky should read this if they want a handle on extremely well written angst. Off to read your next Rayne!

I just read your story. wow. I loved it! True to the characters and wonderful angst. :D

Wow. Just found this one and ended up fascinated and spending much of my day off reading it. Outstanding character study.

I really enjoyed this! Loved that you let Jayne be mean and grumpy, and I'm always a sucker for River with a gun.

One small thing - have you thought about getting a beta to look it through and edit small grammar and stuff? Because I really liked it, and I get that when you've finished a chapter, you just want to get it.. out there! I also realize, that this is an old story, and maybe you feel like you're .. done with it. Anyway, just a suggestion.

But I really loved it, and the development of the relationship. Thanks for this.

This was really delightful. I read it in one sitting. The backstory and development for Jayne was spot-on and it makes the pairing believable. I love that you didn't ignore the fact that Jayne is not a nice man, which is why we love him.

Great work. I really liked it
Keep up the great work. :D

Wow! what a brilliant story! i love that you wrote about river's pregnancy as a result of their coupling, but not making the whole story about it, and more about their relationship in emotional and mental terms.

the back story you created for Jayne was great too! very believable!

anyways, well done, can't wait to see what else you've done!

Love the happy ending

This story is BRILLIANT

I've never read this before, and on finding it I've just read it straight through, because I couldn't stop. It was excellent! Wonderful plot and character development, and a perfect ending. I'm going to bed far too late because of it ...

OMG. That was absolutely amazing. Wow. Everyone was great. I love Wash. He's so weird, in a funny sort of way, I love Mal, Kaylie is well, she's just simply awesome. I loved all of them. You are such a good writer.

I've never been a Jayne/River shipper but damn, your fic here just about darn changed my mind. I hope you continue other sorts of Firefly/Serenity fics, 'coz you're good and I hope they get past Ch 1. :D I'm just sayin' I love reading long fics like this one. :)

Anyway, the was a good job and Good Luck on whatever else you do. :D Pce.

I had to immediately review when I read this line: 'Only cowards took advantage of women. Not to mention – it weren’t godly.'

F-ING AMAZING! I think that might be the Jayne-est sentence I have ever read. It was so wonderfully ironic and moralistic... I laughed for a good minute or two. THANKS!!

have read every chap and love every bit of this fic wonderfull just wonderfull!