I like the way this is written in the present tense- it’s really hard to keep it going with description and at the pace you’ve managed! The whole idea of this fic is once again original- that is an interesting idea, that once Ace and Illusion could’ve been good friends. It does explain quite a lot though…

Sakina x

Lovely fic, Scarab. I like it. :)

You found quite a lot in a single line of dialogue. Beautiful.