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| Sakina the Fallen Angel 2005-08-06 ch 1, | abuseI like the way this is written in the present tense- it’s really hard to keep it going with description and at the pace you’ve managed! The whole idea of this fic is once again original- that is an interesting idea, that once Ace and Illusion could’ve been good friends. It does explain quite a lot though… Sakina x |
| The Lightning Flash 2005-07-07 ch 1, | abuseLovely fic, Scarab. I like it. :) You found quite a lot in a single line of dialogue. Beautiful. |